ThIs story one of the better stories on this site, the characters have a good base for future development. The plot progresses well, with just the right balance of mystery, familarity, and excitment. That makes you want more and leaves you feeling disatisfIed when you realize there is no next chapter. Good work author, keep it up.
ThIs story one of the better stories on this site, the characters have a good base for future development. The plot progresses well, with just the right balance of mystery, familarity, and excitment. That makes you want more and leaves you feeling disatisfIed when you realize there is no next chapter. Good work author, keep it up.
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Games · Sunken Clouds