JSL

LV 11
2017-11-24 Bergabung Global
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Moments 8
JSL
JSL
2 years ago
Commented

Great chapter. New milfs most appreciated :D Not only did our protagonist "steal" Zect mother but also got a noblewoman of highest degree. Poor hero

JSL
JSL
2 years ago
Commented

Great story. Keep the good work up [img=update]

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JSL
3 years ago
Replied to wintermist1994

I kinda liked the approach with "cringiness". I mean, everyone wants to be regonized, if it is throw appearance (Chali and her skincare products - want to look beautiful for her partner) or achievments in Alex case. Let him have his embarrasing moments where people think he is weird. After all he is in a new place with new set a rules and culture? Hothead and eager in the beginning and more cold and calculated later on, is that the approach you want?

JSL
JSL
3 years ago
Commented

Good chapter. Too many one man shows out were side characters get tossed out after the arc. Keep devolop side characters :) adds a nice flavor

JSL
JSL
3 years ago
Commented

Sweet, like the twist with Ophilia being a mother. Getting spicy :D Keep up with slow slice of life approach with character depths. So Ophilia is mid to late 30s, how old is Sian?

JSL
JSL
3 years ago
Commented

Keep up the good writing. Like your aporoach with a character buildup where you delve the small blissfull moments of life 😉 Will the shop have some restriction or will everything on earth be available? Would be hilarious if Alex could buy a nuke

JSL
JSL
4 years ago
Commented

Really interesting novel. Keep up the good writing ;)