I really enjoy it however, the story often has spelling mistakes that just take you out of the moment and the english writing skills are not the best. Some of the character (draco in particular) seem to be very different from their roles in the books too. However, other than that I really like the initial idea and attempted writing. I will continue to read when the next chapter is out.
I really enjoy it however, the story often has spelling mistakes that just take you out of the moment and the english writing skills are not the best. Some of the character (draco in particular) seem to be very different from their roles in the books too. However, other than that I really like the initial idea and attempted writing. I will continue to read when the next chapter is out.