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Zaimokuza: The God Slayer
4.18 (10 peringkat)
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Zaimokuza Yoshiteru, endowed with memories from an alternate world, discovers insights into various anime storylines. Armed with this unique foresight, he embarks on a quest to obtain the powerful Prometheus Grimoire. Harnessing its power, he successfully vanquishes two Heretic Gods, ascending to become the seventh God Slayer in the world.
[Oregairu] [High School DXD] [Campione] [Love Live] [Oreimo] [We Never Learn] and more.
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I couldn't read past chapter 11 because it was too cringe for me although the writing quality was coherent and cohesive the author is mixing so many worlds right from the start I'm unsure of the plot
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Is an interesting novel, using zaimokuza is something i had not see before. hope it can continue for a long time. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Lets start with the most important thing... LALA from To Love-RU IS COMING!!!! Well, its good to read, there are not many mistakes in grammar at all and its fun. It could improve a lot in the world background as the surroundings are barely if not at all described and that character writing needs improvements to reach the level where characters feel to be alive rather than an npc but its getting there. As for the MC? His character needs to be developed a lot more and his personality completely changed after becoming a god slayer
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It's a solid 3. The fic has a lot of good, fun moments, but at the same time the MC's personality changed very quickly and all the characters are very superficial with most of the heroines having basically the same personality and only changing their names. It's still a good wish fulfillment fic to kill time, but other than that there's nothing special.
This one has the most potential from all your fanfics, my advice is to use the techniques that akikan40 use, make it a slice of life and get more deeper connections with tha characters. The increase of strength of the mc is secundary to the story. By steady and don't rush, take your time and make chapters engaging with the mc and the waifus. If you do that I'm pretty sure you can get top 1 here.