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Nero Giovanni, a martial art fanatic dies a classic death by yours truly track Kun
and is set to an otherworld
first world
hunters x hunter world
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So if you read any of my unfinished/poor works before
you could tell English is not my first language
no matter how much I edit these books I am sure some of you will find some miss-spelling and grammatical errors
to that, I say sorry I am improving with every try
so bere wit it for the time
I only write for fun so update my not be consistent
also sorry about this
thank u in advances for any comment
thank you for reding my work
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Dieing in a car accident Nero Giovanni wakes up in a strang room with someone claiming to be the soul administer
Nero is then reincarnated in a new world with all his memory's wthe new abilities
who will his new adventure go
read and find out.
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Story is good. I'm serious here.. Not even once I'm cursing while reading this story. You know what that's mean? It's mean your story is good. There's many stories that makes me cursing because how bad or annoying it is, but yours not. Well for now, I don't know about the future.. alright, well.. I like his personality.. well maybe not that much.. I quite like his power.. and etc.. BUT you just got 4.8⭐ because of grammar! Well that's it.. continue your work.. I hope your writing quality become better in the future~
The plot is good, grammar is bad but somewhat understandable. Would give higher rating if the grammar improves. .....................................................................
he has the potential: s rank, and get very op abilities, but his abilities are only gin level, and he has practiced from the age of 2 to 16 and only at that level, actually he can rule the world when he is 13 with all his cheats,
Not good Not recomended Lots of illogical thinking from the mc Frustrating to read if you read iy seriously but you can binge read it for fun if you want to spend time
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Hello there author... I hope you don't mind my review... To be honest, your up to date story is good enough... The only thing I can see is a bit of immaturity in writing and bad English which both could be fix by writing more and practice more... So my advice would to continue writing and you would be good...
I enjoy this story, always fun to see a Hunter x Hunter fanfic and it is always nice to see how an OC will affect how the story will go and how other characters would develop. My only gripe with the story is a petty one, in the form of me not enjoying reading the chat-log style dialogue.
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I only got few sentences. Just dont drop it and coz of that cover i really want you to go to jojo world and also dont bring in too much worlds hxh n jojo will be enough . Im jojo-crazy but i just want good fic on it (hxh is in my best 5 list along with it but jojo still at top) . Plus u can really stretch jojo story dependin on how far u have read and coz of current events we can only go so far with plot in hxh if u go to Dark continent ya gotta think on ur own for whole new continent arc :P (5 stars from me author)
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I am just here to say you better make him appear in the JoJo world because you used a Jojo cover for the novel. also know he would be to op for Hamon so ... make him appear in diamond because of bites the dust
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The grammar is very bad without speaking about the skills nor that he created the one about flying and even useful but the ones about copying clothes and just wasting time I don't believe that anyone would spend time to create a Skill Not to mention that I personally never liked those MCs who give their cultivation techniques to other people
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one of the best hxh fanfics I've read. Just one problem needs MORE ....................................................................................................................................................................
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