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A teenager wakes up in the body of a fresh graduate in the Naruto world, Along with a Gamer System, but the system can only save spawn points, and level up abilities.
But even with that, the story has to go on, in a world where a simple graduate like him is at the bottom of the pan, he has to slowly rise until he can decide what his dream will be.
All the meanwhile trying to not be killed by conspiracies, and enemies.
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Pros: Another Naruto Timeloop fanfic So far I haven't seen any obvious grammar mistakes in the chapters (Up to chapter 16) The MC as of chapter 16 hasn't suffered for the classic trope of the stronger they are the dumber they become (But this could change down the line depending of the author's writing) Original Arcs and not just putting the MC into the cannon timeline plots to cut corners (But this could also chance down line as there's only 16 chapters so far) A god dam system that doesn't have missions (regardless if you are required to complete them or not)to gain shit is always a plus. Cons: Takes place during the cannon timeline (Maybe it's just me but I'm starting to get sick of reading these Naruto's generation timeline fanfics as more often then not its just a rehash of the original plot but with the Transmigrator placed in there slightly modifying things but alternatively doing nothing to change the plot leading to the same ending regardless) Yet the author whitewashing the Third Hokage(Just a thing that always pissed me of in these fanfics) The MC's "Dream" is very generic like comeon man literally every Transmigrator ever want to becomes the most power being in what ever world they are sent to so its basically a standard thing at this point 😂 Just some other things I wanted to talk about: Why is danzo already targeting my boy with a few hours of him being in this world give the MC a break 😂 Wtf is wrong the first guy who posted that 1 star review bashing the author about how unrealistic the characters are feats wise while using the real world to justify their claims like bro this is a fantasy world chill the hell out Let's just hope this original story doesn't get dropped within 20 chapters or something cause this platform needs more original naruto fanfics that could reach 100+ chapters as there were so many solid fanfics that were dropped long before they were able to reach 50 chapters and it freaking sucks man 😭
it's really weird, the system's supose to have only 2 abilities, but then it's a map, an a danger sensor, an alarm and more. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This feels like a fever dream. A freshly graduated normal genin killed kakuzu after a month or so(real timeline) is fucking stupid. There is no build up. The characters are dumb and believe whatever mc says. Hiruzen isnt cautious. Kakashi is warm to him. Hinata getting a crush on him. Like bro wtf. Not to mention the clear use of AI. Thats all I have to say. Peace out
A shinobi's body is no different from a trained civilian except for chakra. In other words, a shinobi cannot move at the speed of sound, if you pay attention, all ninjas with absurd speed cover their entire body with chakra. The 4th Raikage, Naruto, Killer Bee, Kakashi, Sasuke and even though it is not shown, Madara and Hashirama probably cover their bodies with chakra. In other words, my friend, an ordinary kunai is strong enough to kill monsters like Hashirama and Madara, the only reason why Kaguya cannot be killed with a kunai is because she is the jinchuhriki of the 10 tails, even if she cannot be killed, Kaguya, Hogoromo and Six Path Madara can still be injured by an ordinary kunai by any civilian child. Ninjas are glass cannons. If it weren't for their absurd damage capacity, they could probably be killed by a trained civilian army. And their combat power is not that strong, the strongest character's attack power is at the most exaggerated island level, even that There is no canon character with country-level damage potential, which is exaggerated. The tailed beast bomb is powerful enough to destroy small mountains and large hills and was the most destructive ability in the series. Perfect Susano's single attack does not have the power to destroy a mountain (it can cut but not destroy, even the strongest Susano attack Yasaka no Magatama cannot damage as large an area as the tailed beast bomb). In other words, although ninjas are strong for a civilian, they are quite weak when we look at other anime and none of them, including the Raikage, have the power to move faster than the speed of sound. The free fall speed of the kunai that Minato threw into the air was similar to the Raikage's highest speed, while the kunai fell, he could only turn his eyes and could not move his body.
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usually i love timeloop fics but idk why, i really dont enjoy this one even tho i tried to. maybe someone with more brain than me can explain but somehow its like the system is babysitting the mc and mc can loop to train but still its just... ugh idk. the other timeloop fic does this soo much better i just cant even compare.