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Way of the Stat Shinobi
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Dying sucks.... and roaming in the void for ages even tops it. But hey, I get a chance at reincarnation though. Yet.... I get to be reincarnated to the World of Naruto, where giant Chakra Beasts can nuke you, theres also that lunatic who thinks he's some kind of God, a rogue Uchiha who's dream is to rule the world with the power of the moon. Yup, I'm gonna die again.
Hello everyone! I am open to criticisms as I continue with this story, please do drop a review so that I may correct particular areas I made mistake or lack, maybe you could drop of some suggestions as I continue with the story. I am also referencing other fanfics, all other related works and the wiki if you ask.
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4Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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A fairer review now that I've actually read it. First off this actually has some world buildings thanks to the first chapter. So yeah. The english is quite good and definitely heads and shoulders above a good chunk of fanfictions here. Stability so far is pretty nice. Like maybe around 1.5k words per chapter after the 1st chap? Story is well, not much has happened and I'd like to say it has good pace but MC literally got one of the most used jutsu in fanfictions that is typically reserved for OP MC or endgame ****. Hiraishin. Character design is meh so far This is just a fairer review and once it gets 20 chaps ima review again and hopefully I get a better feel of things.
Can't wait to read. I love gamer Naruto books.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I remember this from Fanfiction.net the the title tho and I'm too lazy to search for it. But please say if you are actually the author or just a filthy dirtbag stealing someone else's work.
A lot of people seemed to mistook this fanfic as something from another site because of some similarities in the synopsis. [Pros] So far the writing was great, the Author is doing his research to avoid making a lot of mistakes. The grammar is great and the fic is easy to read, you won't be hurting your eyes and braincells by reading this fic. The main character know his priorities, he didn't straight up went to pick up girls from a young age, no thinking with his lower head. That's a plus to me. [Cons] Extensive display of status screens, sometimes the author would pull up the whole list of skills when the MC learned only a single skill and his other skills not leveling up. Extensive use of all-caps when displaying system texts. Some people dislike reading texts in all caps. โปโป To the author, I know how it feels to have an OCD, and I myself hate putting wrong informations, but you don't have to worry too much about minor mistakes if they won't affect the story in the long run. (Like 1 year of age and such) Nobody expects a fanfic to be perfect, even the original isn't perfect and full of plot holes, so don't stress yourself about having perfect details in everything. For the first Cons I put, I suggest only displaying skills that had changes in them in some scenarios. Maybe even letting go of the skill description in most cases. Even something like {Shadow Clone Jutsu Lv1 > Lv3}, would have sufficed. Only display the full description when he first learn them or display the whole status and skill lists as a footer for that chapter after reaching your target word count for that chapter. The chapters would be less cluttered with system displays then. As for the all-caps in the format, I suggest putting the system texts inside a type of brackets that is assigned only for the system. I do hate how we can't format texts in this site, but putting them in brackets would be enough for readers to know that it's a system display/message/alerts and prompts.