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Vyr's journey through the multiverse
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The story of a girl named Vyr's path through games, anime, and movies.
I don't really like to write but I though why not give it a shot I'm waiting for stuff to update anyway right? Right now the plan is at least 1.5K words per chapter preferably 3K. I don't know how long ill go for but hopefully it will be a good bit.
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Vyr is awesome this is a story done right she takes no **** from anyone and can cause the funniest situations like the Griffin meat stew and the wall and is just the most badass female mc I've seen.Hopefully she ends up causing mass hysteria at one point in a city side scale from her escapades definitely five stars
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I love it cant wait to continue reading i only just got to the second world and already love it and need more. The writing quality is really good as well as the story cant stop reading.
I really like what you have going here. The MC is great and isn't one of those whiny push-overs (god I hate those) and the rest of the characters interacting with the MC is quite magical. Only thing is that I feel it's a bit rushed between the Witcher and RWBY settings and it would be better if the MC is more discreet about her abilities. She should learn how to bullshit better as sometimes too much information can be unnecessary.
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Honestly, your history is good but you really don't know how to express feelings, the personality of the other characters is also... weird, witchers are a bunch of serious people and I believe you failed to show that. Your progression is not also good, believe me, I had problems with history progression too but you have to show, for example, how the people get close to the Mc and start to care for her.
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if it would be updated more often with new chapters coming out then it would have a much higher score in my opinion
now that RWBY volume 9 is out are you going to resume the book or are you still going to continue to hiatus because I really like this book I think it's 👍 and the best part about it is that it's a Yuri RWBY which is very rare and some of the books that make them end up just flopping at the middle of it but hey man if you need to take your time do what you got to do man we'll still be here rooting for you do you best of my life be good with you
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Great Novel the only problem was in the early chaps were they don't even bother to ask about her strange eyes. Although some of them noticed but I have a case of strange OCD wherein I love details of the Main Characters so maybe its just me. So any reader who gets mad at me for this go **** yourself this is my opinion. Great Novel Author-san please continue more.
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Really great book, nice characters, plot is well developed, it's not tacky with lots of laughs. Don't mind the wait in-between chapters when they are of this quality.
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A really fun and highly enjoyable story, I definitely like the main character and some of the mystery involved with her you find out and some of the later chapters. The main character as well rounded, and the characters around her are well written and well rounded as well. This is definitely a fun story to check out .
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Great bit of power fantasy with yuri.... so yeah I’m totally in and completely biased. Beyond that it seems the author is willing to have our MC work to attain power which I enjoy. Just some minor gripes on writing quality like wrond word usage and grammar errors but nothing too egregious. Thanks for this interesting story and hope you continue to write this to what ever end you have imagined.
Seemsgood so imma read it becuz the first chap was good so imma ask now.... Is this Yuri or do I have their genders wrong..................
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
First of all I think that the writing quality is very good, when I read the book I don’t have any trouble understanding what the author is trying to write and the grammar is good. I’m taking one star away for stability of updates because author doesn’t post much, but when they do it’s always good so not much of a problem. Otherwise, everything is pretty good! Characters, world, and story are all well written. I would prefer if the story was slightly slower, because I just like reading those books, but the pace is already very good. Overall a good book and would recommend reading Ps sorry for the long review, just kinda thought this would help maybe brighten authors day a bit, bc as another author I know the feeling of lack of motivation.