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Voyager's Path
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When Travis's life has hit bottom and he accidently falls down below the bridge, Travis is sent to the Abyss, a place between places. And he meets Arael, The Goddess of death. She provides him a second chance at life in a new world filled with magic, under her advice That she guides him to have a powerful life there. He reluctantly agrees and finds that He is then reincarnated to a new family as Kota Detrut.
Author note: First novel I’ve done, Really wanted to make my own take on that Isekai trope some of those anime do, but I wanted to do it in a way where it doesn’t melt into the power trip fantasy. There will still be updates to older chapters or auxiliary chapters to be up to date.
Feedback on chapters or giving a reviews would be appreciated!
(I will now be uploading to Royal Road as well for this Novel! So see you all soon!)
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Hey All, Author here. I would like to give a review on this as it’d just give more attention to it. But, I’d like to point out some things I enjoy and don’t enjoy about my own writing. 1. This is my own distaste, but I hate how much I have to rely on other books or my inspirations to progress things to happen. Mushoku Tensei is a good example. 2. The world building in this is a priority, as it makes the world feel alive and I feel like I’ve been doing a good constant work on that. This world is a breathing one that doesn’t always revolve around the MC, and I try to make it seem possible. 3. When it comes to the plot itself, I feel like it’s a jumbled mess that I only I can figure out? Maybe that’s just me, but I feel I always need to go back to older chapters to add or remove something to make it all more comprehensible. 4. Action scenes in this novel are my favorite things to write in this and I feel like they are descriptive enough and creative enough! 5. Humor in this book is just my own humor that I use in real life, using inspirations from KonoSuba and other things. There’s nothing much I can say about this since I do enjoy my own humor(Hit the yoinky Sploinky!) Hopefully, you enjoy reading this! I always strive for feedback and learning to be a better writer!
Gives me jobless reincarnation vibes