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Voodoo and Hoodoo: HP. [Dropped for now]
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Death through unexpected means gave him a chance to live a second life in a world he knows, yet also foreign at the same time.
[(Warning: English is my second language, so some spelling mistakes and bad grammer are to be expected);PS:it will be an AU]
I don't own anything but the OC's. Harry Potter belongs to JK.Rowling and Warner Bros.
[P.S: the story will be writen by both me and the help of an AI.]
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good story Grammer is iffy as well as the smoothness of the dialog and the shortness of the chapters that's what I could point out but the Grammer could be fixed with a double check of Grammer or the auto Grammer fix or simply revising it after you step away for a day that helps me.
I know, self reviewing is shameless, there's only two chapter at this time with only one of them being over 1000 words. But give it time, I try to make 2 chapters per week with atleast going beyond the 2000 word mark. As of now, it will take trial and error for me to make my idea into fiction. Till then, stick around and good day to you all. [PS: This fanfiction will dive into the history of the US and UK and their culture heritage]
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Are you going to make the MC like Dr. Facilier? Otherwise known as The Shadow Man from Princess and the Frog.