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How do you feel if a certain bitch ruined your field project because she was 'just jealous'? Then made you and the other members traumatized for life? And you have to relive them again and again?
Anyone would feel like sending that bitch to hell, right?
I would too. If only a certain force didn't regress me back to that wretched place just to save the bitch.
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Naise Story. You can add many conflict and many solution. Its very good for me as a newbie. I everything make a some novel... But not good yet Like your exactly. I m really thanks for you because it is give some inspiration to make novel be a good novel.
In like your writing here. Although I have to note that there are some typos, I think you should check again before uploading the next one. I really like Maggie as the filler! Can we meet more of him in the future?? Peace out.
I really like this story, so far, it was well written. but i couldn't say much about the character/story, since it's haven't developed that much. i'm looking forqard for the next chapter :)