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Vegeta's Older brother.
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I never expected that I would be here, to be miraculously transported to another world, and are related to one of the most badass characters in all of anime,
I am in for one hell of a trip
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It’s a pretty good read the only thing that’s glaringly wrong is that you when he is speaking he says he when it should be I e.g. when he was speaking to whis he says “ he was testing ingredients to see which was poisonous.” When it should be “I was testing ingredients to see which was poisonous.” beside that all I can think of is that its sometimes not clear who is speaking.
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(Read up to chapter 7) Only complaint I have about this is that the chapters are too short. There is dc in the tags but there hasn’t yet been a mention to anything dc related. The only mention to anything even earth related is a Philly cheesesteak which I thought was pretty funny. All in all I have high hopes. Author please dont drop.
Did I forget to mention, No harem, Yes! No harem! Please enjoy my story, if you do not, then,...Sorry? Did I forget to mention, No harem, Yes! No harem! Please enjoy my story, if you do not, then,...Sorry? Did I forget to mention, No harem, Yes! No harem! Please enjoy my story, if you do not, then,...Sorry? Did I forget to mention, No harem, Yes! No harem! Please enjoy my story, if you do not, then,...Sorry? Did I forget to mention, No harem, Yes! No harem! Please enjoy my story, if you do not, then,...Sorry?