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Undesired Power
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Alex Zuki, a half African-American and a half-Japanese kid moved to Japan where he is bullied for mistaking Anime to be the same as real-world Japan. Five years later, it is even harder to differentiate as he is thrown into a secret world dominated by superpowers and gains the ability to stop time.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Total score - 4.6 The story premise and the hook are very nice, I have a feeling that it will be a very good story just with what is written so far. There are small problems with the writing such as words not being placed appropriately. But overall it is very good.
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.