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A primordial entity who is a fan of human creations has decided to create an alternative reality to correct certain mistakes made in the writing of his favorite secondary characters. Here he will try to create a different Jacob from the pitiful puppy of the original films to give him the direction that he deserves.
I don't own any main characters from this franchise except two or three characters that I'm going to create. The cover picture is not mine and I hope the author doesn't come after me and kill me for borrowing it. This fanfiction is an English version of the one posted on my second account which is unfortunately inaccessible now. English is not my first language so there will definitely be syntactic mistakes so bear with me.
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TheHandOfAuthor

Good one, but I demand Justice for Grammar...

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SHCH7
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So he remains a simp, always jumping hoops for Bella and the Cullens. Loses the girl he loves twice. Fights his brothers for the Cullens, and still imprints on Renesmee.... He's an even bigger simp than canon.

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BIG_BAD_WOLF2000

From one author to another, you have my appreciation. Short but fulfilling, well executed, not boring at all, keep writing you are a natural, you should also do an original story.

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TheQueen_foxy_270

loved tge book.one of my favourite twilight novels ❤️thanks, author. great work.👍

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1yr
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Hellcat1963

Absolutely love this fanfic.❤️ Keep up the great work.

1yr
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Zachary_Winter

Regardless of how the book ends, I feel like Jacob in some form or another becomes the Cullen’s dog. Without that ending doing ALL the heavy lifting, the book would have ended worse than the original! What the author did was just… it’s like going from point A to B but, in the middle taking a detour. The intent is different but the result is essentially the same!

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ForeVver

Vamos lá, a história é boa se você ignorar as inconsistências da trama, mas tirando isso é muito bom para uma leitura rápida.

8mth
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cluelessauthor

another fantastic story, just wow. characters, suspense, twists all somehow crammed into 20 chapters. this story is an excelent read even if you don't love the twilight franchise

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Novel_Lover_2360

This was amazing ❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.....

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Kaheem_Edmonds

this was very good and I like the Danielle girl and the fact Seth and found love for change

1yr
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InfinityWolfS2

Gostei muito do livro, foi uma nova experiencia. Não existe muitos livros que seja continuado igual ao desse autor Espero que continue com o magnifico trabalho, e continue a melhorar cada dia mais.

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Lordkael

great story, would not have ended it like that but I respect what you did there, it's perfectly understandable. Thanks for this, this is a great story, I recommend it.

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Lilith_Demontre

Es una buena historia, se respeta el personaje de Jacob, su personalidad e ideales. Si bien en algunas partes es confuso e incómodo, toda la saga es así. Me encanta que no quedara con Reneesme

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Blueflameh

It’s an alright fanfiction, honestly not bad but not my cup of tea. The pacing of the story feels like you’re reviewing a movie by fast forwarding the slightly less but still important parts while only hitting the main plot points. So it takes a lot from the potential of the story. It’s how I imagine my own fanfic writing feels the others. Where you get the main points but not much passed that. So overall not bad, but I’m not going to say it’s good. Pretty mid but overall if you enjoy twilight you might enjoy it, if you don’t like twilight then… I’d say you can go without reading this.

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LoneWolf_3000

it was a good read just have to look past all the grammar mistakes

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LastGod

absolutely unreadable dialog. makes no sense sound like AI. the idea is good but he sitll seem like hes simping for bella.

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raiinz
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My Respect i think that was one of the best Twilight fan-fics that i have read and i have read many so Readers Twilight Lover WHO want a different end for Jacob read this it May Not be for all people but many will Love it

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S1LV3RS

ughhhh, the kind of story goes.with script-pt like format. and more talking less doing, cant work.my imagination throughly, though writings are alright, characters.show.emotion... just.that it lacks details... bit still.its.good though

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marawa

Thanks for the story. ......................................... I enjoy it!! ......................................... Eternity is the End! Love it!

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The_Jonbergdahl

i really love this book Thank you for posting it

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