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LV 13

The writing is ok, like there are a lot worse. There are some grammar and editing mistakes, bit other then that it's understandable and readable. It's getting updates lately but they aren't stable. There basically is no story, don't expect much except girl gathering and sex. For example for some reason like 50 or some dumb amount of nekos want him for a master/husband and he just accepts and has sex with all of them for reasons above me. I mean I know it's a harem story but cmon you could accept like 2 if you really wanna go for some Nekos, why accept their whole fucking village and the reason is cuz he stronk and cuz he save em... The characters are bland and uninteresting. Basically the worst kind of a harem novel where it's basiclly pokemon with women... The world background makes little to no sense since the characters are basically made for the mc nothing more...

4yr 19

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LV 14

Rain_Miko

Oh this news ?? What about other ?? Nah who care I will still read because I'm miss u and waiting long 😂😂😂 ,, and give u 5 star always for harem and milf lol 🤣🤣🤣

4yr 10

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LV 2

GoldenBeast

This is just another one of those stories with "wish fulfillment" clichés, and is so it is very bad. The development of the characters and the scenario is very weak. The interaction between the characters and basically one-dimensional, are "empty" characters. The interaction between the mc and the harem is practically retarded, there is no development of anything in this story. Just another one of those generic wish-fulfillment stories, and one of the really bad ones. If you like a story with coherence and development, this story is not for you.

4yr 9

Lihat 3 balasan

LV 12

Dayside

Horrible writing style, it's like it was written by a child. Lots of grammatical errors and mistakes. The characters are one dimensional and barely make any sense, such as an 8 year old essentially having 130 something future wives and making the climax, just what the..

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