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To Be A Deity

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[April '20]
This story follows the path Jun takes after having his village destroyed by gods, and having one of them use him as a vessel. Surely he can't be the only being on the planet with this newfound power. He must venture now to save hidden celestial beings from an entrapment, and fix what went wrong.
This story is in the present-tense. These things are meant to be happening to you in the moment - all of you - even though it’s based some time ago.
There is a blend of the English and American language. Any “misspellings” of the grammatical differences are intentional, and my own preference. As long as you know what I mean, this story hasn’t been lost to the ages.
This writing was originally meant to be a game. One that you can play. So a lot of what is here relies heavily on visuals, which is a bit of a problem. I hope your imagination is flexible.
I have sprinkled this pseudo-gameplay with hints of its future, and references of our World. It would be interesting to see what you can find!
Many species are humanoid. They are more simply described as “people”. You get the general idea.

Art by u/Luscine

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The world is ever-shifting.

To Be A Deity will spawn 13 side-stories, then incur a name change. The name change will spawn 26 side-stories, then incur a second name change.

To be updated more often than officially published works, feel free to visit the Discord and keep up with stories that will spend years on the shelf.

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If I were to give an honest review, I'd give this story about a 4. At its current state. This is my first story and, in 2020, I filled the book with the first 52 "chapters". However, I was only proud of the first 3 "slips". The first official chapter. The introduction. There is a lot to the world I wanted to create, so it was difficult to mention only a few things in the first chapter. Now, in 2023, I've updated all of the other chapters since I've never been proud of them. After the introduction was a decent amount of exposition but I've never been a fan of "exposition chapters". So, after the first chapter is now 3 other "first chapters". Which allows for a slow start, but a steady welcome to the world I've created. Slowing down the start was the only thing I could think of to avoid "exposition chapters", but they're still paced well enough for you to keep consistently learning.

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