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Time witchcraft
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The only words she overheard as a child, Penny can still blurt out twenty years later. The attraction of magic to people is irresistible, the door to this wonderful world will never be open for ordinary people, and it is more painful to have the pleasure of glimpsing a corner than to know nothing.
Give ordinary people another possibility, one person's kindness can change everything, magic does not give up on you.
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this fanfic had a lot of potential, it is nicely written, love the way you change Penny's point of view instead of just letting her hate the wizarding worlds. though minor mistakes like Eli being a called a she instead of a he. but overall, i can't wait to see more chapters from you author. hope you don't dump this novel halfway through or less, and hope you don't have any author block!๐๐๐
I really like this story I just can't get through it and the confusing grammar where sometimes I don't know who is talking, but aside from that it's great maybe put it through grammarly if you don't want a editor. But keep it the good work!