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Bab 4: Update: Reworking the Narrative

Heyo Hello!

Story Change, Please Reread.

I'm going to post the next chapter on 11/09 and I will have edited the previous chapters

I've finally decided where I want the story to go, I hope.

In accordance to that I've made some changes to the dialogue and Jace's profile.

I've read a lot of OmegaVerses, where the Alpha is extremely rich. I still wanted this trope, however I didn't want him to be like the son of a conglomerate, *Cough* Dojin Park or Diasuke Kambe. BUT!!! For this new story line. This man is now the richest and most influential in the city, so I need to change the business dialogue. Mr.Kene is developed now as well, so I need to change how he's referred to in the story.

I can't wait to start drawing this! Sketches will be on my BL Tiktok: @byul_is_adorable

Twitter: @roseisdrawing_


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