Bab 2: Edited Chapter 1 The End???
Time:??? Place:???
Third person:
A building filled to the brim with guards. Was surrendered by an army. The army suddenly charged and clashed with the guards. Gunshots,literally fire,ice,rock, and many other things, shot through the air.
Dead bodies were spread through the compound as the army continued their march. A tall black-haired man with a sharp jawline ran up a staircase with a strange object in hand.
POV:???
As I ran up the stairs, breathing heavily. I clutched the strange object in my hand tightly. As I continued to run up the stairs, a stray shot hit my side. Bleeding I quickly clutch my side.
I muttered, "Should have seen that coming." My blue eyes shined with determination. I knew what had to be done. No amount of bleeding could stop that.
As I reached the top of the staircase with blood trailing behind me. I said with a sad smile. "These hellish years are finally done with." With a very complex machine in front of me. I pressed a button and entered the strange object. The machine begins to hum.
But I heard a shout. "STOP" Turning my head. My eyes filled with Dread but a moment seing a tall woman with hazel eyes. My ####, I thought. The woman then said in front of me with anger
"Why did you do this #### ? "
I replied, "I had to, not wanted to."
She answered back with annoyance and anger. "That doesn't answer my question. Why?" "It's doesn't matter now. you're too late to stop me ," I said with acceptance.
Suddenly, the machines started rapidly humming. The women suddenly lunged at the machine with realization. Only to hit a barrier I created. The woman yelled "NO" as a Shockwave exploded out.
As I stumbled to the ground. I thought,
"This is the end, I deserve." In the background, an old man could hardly be seen
POV:???
I guess my work is done here.
The old man suddenly turns to us and says. "Well, hello there, this is the end of the story. But for you, it is just the beginning. " Then everything begins to fade away..
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Shaunw Ps comment any grammer mistakes I made