Bab 15: Purge
Just spent 10 minutes purging the comments of two idiots. And I will continue to do that from this moment forward. SO, apparently I was told that I should not post stories online until I want them to be crticized. Anyone who believes that I would like them to answer what right do they have to give criticism. You are just one of the billion people here pretending to be an expert.
ALso. they are bitching about the strangest facts. One being that the mc is too weak or he had his entire childhood to train or shit like that. Then there was something about mc should not have any powers if he has one for all that will hurt mc like midoriya. Then they were offended by the fact the the mc looks like bell cranel and would have his scrawny appearance. They were offended the fact that the mc would not be buff or a macho man. They were offended by the fact that the mc was not op and just at the level to destroy the entire universe. The normal reacting for anyone who had tits flashed in his face is to blush and stare. I am not going to fucking apologize for that. This is not a cultivation novel. Why the fuck should I change anything for these two fucking dicks.
This will not be a love story. I can say that, that is not true anymore. No, this is not a love story.
If you want all of these thing to happen then pay me 200 dollars and I will change them. Because, unless I can make any money from you. Your opinions does not mean anything to me. Some facts I like so I still add them. Until then, I will write whatever I want. Everything has a price. And it will increase if both of those dicks don't pay me. Each day the price will go up by 20 dollars.
They did have some valid criticism. To be honest, I have never written a shotacon story or stuff like this so this is pretty strange to write for me. It is aIso difficult for me to write a light femdom story as well. I admit I cannot get the thoughts of mc or get him to express himself enough. That is a recurring problem for me. But all those are thrown into the garbage when you take into account their overall opinion.
This novel is just something that I am making up. There are three systems, a dungeon system to get money and fight monsters. A game creation system to live a game life and get skills. And a shop system to buy items. There is cooking thrown in as well. If you think that this story has an outline then you are delusional. I am just adding whatever I want and writing about it.
This had shotacon. ANd please , write wring paragraph about it while crying that mc should be strong. He should have muscles coming out of his entire body. He should be an alpha man. He should not have a weak appearence like bell cranel and be the perfect specimen of a man who would have women throwing himself at him. Or he should go out and conquer everyone and then come back and make a harem with all amazonians below him. I am not going to do that.
Please tell me that mc should not have one for all that would break his body should he use it. In such a case, he should have no powers at all. This was the exact comment
"A power that hurts the user? Now you also copy Izuku Midoriya? To have a self-destructive power I prefer not that the MC does not have any power"
Your preferences could take a fucking hike as far as I care.
This is not a love story. That was my mistake. This is a shotacon. Please, bitch about it to me.
EDIT :: Alright guy, no reverse rape.
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