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Bab 7: Author note/Again...

These past 2 days I've been taking the time to practice writing. Specifically creative and descriptive writing. Likewise, I will be writing in only 1st person perspective.

I will mostly focus on Raizel's POV but I might occasionally switch to other POVs as well. Starting now this fanfic will be a way for me to practice.

Other things will be changed besides the style. The wish that I was originally going to change will now be removed entirely. The system that he uses will look and help him differently. After reading this chapter you should see what I mean.

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On the cold, hard, stone platform lay a tall, handsome body covered in dust and blood. Seeping through those lifeless, crimson eyes of his was dried blood and tears.

Raizel POV

'When was the last time I felt like this? My last life? No, the last time I felt this weak was when I first came to this world. I had just arrived and wanted to explore this world that used to be nothing but fiction for me. Then I got attacked by that small group of poor, muscular men. I guess I was a little bit reckless back then. But now...now my body is so sore and in so much pain.'

Through his blurry eyes, he saw a relaxed figure inching closer to him every second. He would spin the stolen scythe between his entire body like he was a professional performer performing for the last time for the king himself.

"You surprised me in the beginning magician. I never thought that someone would use a high-level spell at the price of their life force instead of Magoi. Before I kill you, tell me what drove you to recklessly fight me. Was it money, power, women?" Amaimon asked.

I tried speaking but my crippled body had lost its functions long ago. As I stared into his cruel eyes filled with expectation, a sigh was heard.

"No answer huh? Well, what can I expect from a weakling like you?"

The sound of a sharp blade cutting through the wind and the pungent, metallic smell of blood was all I could think about.

'Swoosh'

3rd person POV

Surrounded by a starry void, Amaimon crouched to see if his enemy was dead. His rough blue hands grabbed the severed head of Raizel and checked to see if he still had the common signs of a living person. Unbeknownst to him, a purple transparent ball had left his body the second his head was detached and whisked away.

In a vast, milky white throne room a purple ball appeared.

Raizel POV

The pain in my body vanished and all I saw was pitch black. The next thing I knew, I was in a beautiful throne room surrounded by smooth, white, marble statues of famous mythical beasts. I noticed a familiar figure sitting on the large throne.

"We meet again. Earlier than I expected." ??? said.

"You're-!"

"Yes, It's me ROB." ROB interrupted.

"Why am I here again?" I asked.

"You are here because you died again."

ROB continued, "Before you start grieving, I brought you here for a few reasons. When I sent you to that world, I did it for entertainment. It was sort of like watching a TV for me. But you disappointed me. You could have been much stronger if you used your powers smartly. Since I don't like leaving off on bad endings, I will reincarnate you again. Except this time, you have 4 wishes, 2 for appearance and location, and 2 for power. Make your wishes."

I thought harder this time about my wishes. Remembering the friends I made and the ambitions I had, I made my choice.

"I wish to look exactly like Cadis Etrama Di Raizel again."

"Going for a repeat perhaps? This better be interesting." he muttered.

I was getting more and more anxious the longer I talked.

I wish to be reincarnated in the world of Magi. I want to be reborn as a 15-year-old orphan with a decent amount of money in the city of Qishan. The time I get there should be a day before Alibaba and Aladdin meet."

"My third wish will be to have all of Cadis Etrama di Raizel's abilities, including his race, without having to use my life force to use them. Except this time, I want to be as proficient as Raizel in using them from the start. I also want my soul to be as strong as his from the start."

"Next." ROB said after a moment of thought.

I was relieved seeing that the wish was accepted and tried clearing my non-existent throat.

"For my last wish, I want one of those gamer systems that I remember reading about when I was younger. One with a status screen, quests, inventory, and store where I can buy essentially everything but at a cheaper price than before. I also want the abilities to improve through ranks, not levels, where each rank up increases the strength of their respective ability by at least double."

"Hmm, fine I will do it on a couple conditions. To make this interesting for me, you won't stay in only the world of Magi. Occasionally, you will be sent to different worlds where you must complete a task. The difficulty of the world will also be raised after a period of time."

"I'm fine with that." I said. Having experienced death twice my confidence had increased by a huge amount.

"Well, off you go then. Keep in mind that if you disappoint me again... there won't be another chance." He warned.

With a loud clap, a bright light illuminated the room, taking away the purple orb that was Raizel with it.

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This chapter came a like 2 days late because I have school again which sucks. I'm still practicing writing because after finishing this I want to write my own novel.


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