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The Wish of the Dragon
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This is a fanfic of highschool dxd, a different path of what if Issei and Rias, etc. relationship have a fall out with each other.
Issei changed from his old self to the new him, its a semi-NTR at the start meaning Rias etc doesn't have s*x with their new boyfriend.
After Issei went missing Rias etc started to realize what have they done and regretting their action but when they reunited once more Issei is not the same as he used to be, a pervert lucky go around changed to the badass Issei now.
Issei will be traveling to different worlds to meet new girls, the 1st girl is Semiramis, then Scathach, Jalter, and Jeanne.
ENGLISH IS NOT MY 1ST LANGUAGE SO EXPECT BAD GRAMMAR!
The early chapter is kinda hard to read but after 10 chapters or so, the quality should improve drastically. I will fix it after I finished the fanfic.
DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN ANYTHING IN THIS FANFIC EXCEPT MY OWN STORY AND CHARACTER.
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This is such an awesome fic, although it has the same problems like any other fic, but the story is just that good so you won't mind that problem. For me personally, i enjoyed and hope the author to keep writing it more.
Nice wicked way of the new dxd but don't let the male mc down give him an op life up and break his engagement so the new harem he has is suited for him namely high gods and goddesses that like the new him.
Zero-effort story. Complete rubbish writing. No attempt at even properly formatting or making it readable after 95+ chapters of nonsense. Characters are incredibly unrealistic and their behavior makes no sense for anyone who's made the journey out of their parents' doorway. Story is only at the top of Fanfics list because of spam reviews and stones. A perfect example of how garbage can be elevated and presented as something worth caring about in a broken system like Webnovel's. Complete waste of time for everyone involved.
I love this fanfic. For those of you guys that are hesitating because it has NTR in the description, don't. Like the author said the girls don't f*** the other guys, so it's not that bad. Think of this fanfic as an alternate reality/alternate universe. In the original they lived happily ever after, and in this one they just didn't. If you don't want to hate the original girls, then you should probably not read it because you will. The MC will rebuild his Harem with different women from different worlds. As he trains to get stronger and stronger. The only thing I don't like about the novel. Is when he goes to different worlds, it just takes too got dam long. I understand that the author is trying to build relationships with the future harem members. And like the author said, hes trying not to make it look like the MC is a Pokemon Master. That's just throwing poke balls at the women in capturing them. It's just that he's in a different world chapter after chapter after chapter. Overtime it just doesn't feel like a DxD fanfic anymore. As soon as he starts traveling to different worlds, he goes to one world after another and never really goes back. The author was doing a good job at throwing in dialogue of the DxD world. Like updating us on what was going on with in the DxD world with the MC's disappearance. But so far it seems like he's just hasn't done it since the past couple chapters, and it has sort of lost the DxD fanfic Vibe for me. For me personally I would love less erotic chapters like describing how they're having *** for a whole two chapters. And have less chapters of each World he's traveling to. And throw in more information on whats going on in the DxD world. Another thing is that I don't like that the other DxD characters know about what happened and they hate what the girls did to the MC. But they don't want to punish the girls because they don't want them to suffer, punish them a little bit. Like make the angle a fallen angle. That would have been great. But not much punishment has happened, which is BS in my book. But other than that I love it.
So it was NTR? Sorry i dislike NTR So i'll give this novel 1 star Doesn't like it? Blame yourself for making NTR novel And who ever like NTR wish your wive not get taken by another man
I canโt read this..there are so many problems. Not only is the story extremely cringy, the characters talk as if they are all giving speeches, the paragraphs arenโt spaced properly, random sh*t that donโt make any sense keep on happening and I only read up to the second chapter so I can only imagine what will happen in future chapters. The grammar is excusable since the author already stated that English isnโt his first language. The story doesnโt make any sense, even for a fanfic. It just feels overwhelmingly forced overall.
It is among the most fulfilling fan fiction of Highschool DxD you can read at net. Pro: Slightly realistic Isse and his girls (Here old lovers) as a person who lives for 10,000 years will have multiple partners whether they are male or female. Isse is dethroned from his status as Alpha in his pack from the start. But the way author portrayed them as foolish girls is also refreshing. My only request is to make them his maids rather than killing/tormenting them for many years till that they understand his past sacrifices and respect his feeling as in original story he accepts them as his family, so revenge on family for such matter will not be appropriate. (While looking him going cheesy with his new harem, of course. Fast revenge is not always appropriate, make it slow poison.๐๐) Thanks author for writing this story at amazing speed. For Grammar Nazis: Stay Off, Nigga. This is our turf.
chapter 27 and on turns the story into garbage and makes me want to shoot myself at how much of a dumb ass he is when he lost his memory and turns the story from good to complete and utter garbage.
Good Job...๐๐๐ ๐ฎ๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ๐ฑ๐๐ฟ๐ฅ๐ฅฃ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐ฃ๐ค๐ฅ๐ก๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ฅก๐ฆ๐ฅง๐ฐ๐๐ช๐ฉ๐จ๐ง๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฏ๐ผ๐ฅโ๐ต๐พ๐ถ๐ท๐ธ๐น๐ฝ๏ธ๐ฅข๐ฅค๐ฅ๐บ๐ช๐ฅ๐ป๐ฅ๐ด๐บ ๐ฎ๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ๐ฑ๐๐ฟ๐ฅ๐ฅฃ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐ฃ๐ค๐ฅ๐ก๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ฅก๐ฆ๐ฅง๐ฐ๐๐ช๐ฉ๐จ๐ง๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฏ๐ผ๐ฅโ๐ต๐พ๐ถ๐ท๐ธ๐น๐ฝ๏ธ๐ฅข๐ฅค๐ฅ๐บ๐ช๐ฅ๐ป๐ฅ๐ด๐บ
I read the change of dragon, it was really amazing I expect good things out of this novel. Good luck, Iโm cheering for you.(I like the original story so, if possible can you make it similar)
Writing quality: rip tenses. Some verbs are not conjugated properly. Choice of words seems stiff at times. However, the novel is more than readable Stability of updating: I have no complaints on this. The author updates frequently and seems to have the will to complete his/her novel. Story development: I like how the story is panning out in the beginning. He was forced to remove his pieces because the betrayal he experienced changed something on it and on the process of fixing this, he met new people that will help him get in terms of the things done to him. However on the latest chapters, IMO the author shouldnโt just willy nilly add characters just to be a harem member for the main character. Especially in the latest one(c27ish), the mc had an amnesia for using his power in order to survive and the author added another women instantly. I wouldnโt mind a large harem(im not into them but you do you author) but introduce them gradually and with proper background info. Adding to this, I really donโt like NTR even if the soft kind(there are NO sexual relations between old harem and new asshole boyfriends(c27)) but thatโs the premise and that wonโt change. However, the mc should still be a bit paranoid, even though he can โtrustโ the new harem now, so it will be realistic. You donโt just get over multiple cheating for a few months. Character design: This is only for the new ones. As I said before, donโt just add characters for his harem. It isnโt that fun to read people meeting and falling in love in 1 chapter. I donโt feel โinvolvedโ in their romance iykwim. Like the twin dragons, their meeting is really arbitrary and I feel like theyโre not developed as characters because they donโt have a decent background. World background: I mean this novel is inspired by HSDxD so I donโt think itโs relevant to include this rating. Conclusion: Iโm enjoying your novel author, however there are some issues that would make this even better if fixed IMO. I hope you take some of these ideas to heart for the improvement of your novel and thank you for writing this.
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Just shameless author review, this is my 1st novel i have ever made and its only filled with my wish fulfillment desire. This novel might not be a liking to some people but hey everyone taste is different right? This is a harem fanfic so for harem hater this is not for u
Well this fanfic had promising start. But as the novel progresses it becomes worse and worse. This is just another super wish fulfillment type of novel. Well what do i even expect from fanfics. First of all, power system of this fanfic is absolute garbage. Sometimes it seems author himself doesnโt even know what he is writing. It may be due to world travelling part but even then it is just so stupid. I dropped this fanfic after author said Azure Dragon God from ATG is comparable to whatever dragon from Highschool DxD. Worst thing is how author make mc super godly strong. Okay that is not problem? Well author just describes 70% of the chapter just how handsome and super strong he is. Believe me, I am not exaggerating 70% of this novel is just glorifying MC and describing how nothing can harm him. You wanna see some action? Nope author will just describe how godly MC is. Last of all, characters in this fanfic are all superficial. I dont have much to say on this. Also author just copies sentences and paragraphs from original sources. There is nothing original in his writing. All in all this is one of the worst fanfics on the platform. I dont even know how people still read this.
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This Work seems to be stolen from someone("Author" also said that he copy paste until there, i dont know if it is his previous work or someone else work), after chapter 28 the story goes completly down hill, i could only read until chapter 30, because it was so horrible bad.
terrible story, no idea how this garbage is so popular, could hardly read to chapter 100 chapters while cringing so badly. world background - DXD world so nothing new updates used to be regular so I will give him that. Character design - nothing new story development - brain damage level terrible. writing quality above average
Just want to say how great this fanfic is although there is ntr at the start its only kisses nothing to extreme. Love how issei become so badass OP ahaha you should try it
Started reading this because someone said it was one of the few good harems, I made it 2 chapters in before I dropped. The grammar is horrible. It's like it was written by a 10 year old with English as a second language. Keeps referencing some other FF as if we're supposed to read the authors mind and just know what it is. Really, really, really bad.
Awesome fanfic please don't drop this Author it's so good I can't wait to see the mc go in Maken-ki thicc๐๐ and the rating game. If by chance you decided to drop this I will cast [EXPLOSION] in your house ๐๐๐๐ That's all I want to say and make sure to mass release hehe!!.