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The Time Repeat itself

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Penulis: Cripys

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Many believe that the world will end on August 13, 2022, and that the black sphere that struck the earth will have already destroyed our planet. However, this did not occur. did you know why it didn't happend?.

"becouse I'm caught in this f*cking time loop, dammit!"-,-

The earth is unable to escape its time and space cycle for whatever reason.

No One 17 and Under Admitted

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  1. LeeYou
    LeeYou Berpartisipasi 8
  2. Elona_Alone
    Elona_Alone Berpartisipasi 5
  3. Grandsensei
    Grandsensei Berpartisipasi 3

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LeeYou

it's good got a potential but because if the gramar. naah your just a new writer right? just keep going I support you as long as you keep going dont stop

2yr
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Dorordoro

the start is trilling the story seem kinda dark but naah who cares got a potential and room to become good story i will suport you aswell Author-nim

2yr
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Drei05

Making grammatical mistakes is fine since you're new and english isn't your main language. You're doing great for a first timer, so keep up the good work! (๑¯ω¯๑)

2yr
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Ja_Ka_0195

This has a good and nice plot with a lot of good characters but the author has a long way to go and grow it's a nice book but the grammar throws me off can't wait for future chaps

2yr
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Elona_Alone

Are you looking for a time escape novel? well this is for you. I must admit that the author really did a great job in writing this beautiful novel. Everything is well explain, and despite the fact that this isn't my typical kind of story, I'm still going to read. Ps. This novel will keep you to the edge (◔‿◔)

2yr
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GTHarris08

it's an amazing work of art.😁the only slight off-putter is the minor grammatical errors, if not, it'd be perfect.

11mth
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Zenithnovels

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Penulis Cripys