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The System: The Real Civilian Shinobi
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Okay, so how do I put this...
I have never been the best at explaining stuff but I'll try, so the thing is have you ever felt like you are going mad, you see things that aren't there, hear sounds that are not real?
No... uhhh... hehe Me neither, h-ahah-ah...
So what do you say we get this show on the road, you're gonna go in and I'm gonna support you from behind... what do you mean that sounds weird, those bandits are not gonna clear themselves, chop chop, let's go we got this man!
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We'll There's +1 for the weird introduction, now before you click off, I'll just explain in brief what this story is about, this isn't a transmigration or reincarnation fic so I probably would lose half the audience, and the main character is weakish at the start, bye to the other half.
The main character is a civilian, yes I know that there are many cool clans in Naruto world...but shush, my story, write your own then...
Well there you have it a weird into and a weirder explanation, hey do I at least get points for managing to keep making it weirder and cringier... No?
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I think it's pretty good that mc isn't reincarnated. You never find mc's personality and behavior silly. I think he's acting his age. The novel is very pleasant to read. I suggest you read.
The premise is nice, the story flow is good (Till chapter 14) I hope the academy phase ends quickly so that we can get to the Chunin exams arc, because realistically, that's why everyone is here for!!!!
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So there's nothing obviously bad about this novel, it has a constant pace which is not too fast or too slow. The cheat is balanced and practical. The side characters aren't hallow and are fledged out. Its all good except its boring. Nothing of interest happens that you havent read in 10 other naruto fanfics, the cheat isn't too special and the plot points are mundane for a lack of better words. It doesn't get your blood pumping wanting to know whats going to happen next .it makes you feel like there's no reward at the end of the story. Its bland.
aside from the changes in some major character's personality, I think this is pretty good. It's a system novel but not an Isekai, so a Civilian shinobi suddenly have a system, which I think is a clever twist compared to the countless Naruto fic out there.
Love it so far, and don't have any issue, seems pretty original too, the only issue is that there is a chance you abondon it, and you're a very talented writer with great ideas so i hope not. In the end, 5 stars for you
this is a good story compared to most Naruto fan fics that focus on the girls or the MC is just unbeatable and when he does get beaten once he goes into a deep depression but this one doesn't and that's very good so it has mine and Snape's approval
I hope the more of this!! I really liked the previous one..............I hope the more of this!! I really liked the previous one..............
(ch32) I must say that this book was a pleasant surprise, as always, I don't like to question things about the plot because it is the author's work, the Kenjutsu part seems good to me, but with a system it would be a waste not to include Ninjutsu, the system is an extremely useful tool to be a master of all trades, I find Fuinjutsu excellent, I know you don't want to do longer chs, but at least when it comes to training and Fuinjutsu I feel that you could extend them a little more to advance plot
Just have to show support I really enjoy the story and I want to read more thanks to the author for real much love and appreciation.
I'm putting this to inform author that this story doesn't have the Naruto tag in it. Love the story. Thank you the amazingI'mfillingupthewordcount.
I don’t really know what to write other than go read the story it’s enjoyable and a little different from other naruto system stories on webnovel at least
I'll give you my hopes one more time I really liked this novel you have no idea how frustrating it was when you discontinued it, just... don't give it up pretty please
nice Naruto fanfic.keep up the good work author.writing quality is good.mc is very fleshed out character.
It's mostly training but it is a fun read for me and i hope mc learns 4th hokage teleportation jutsu or something like raikage special lightning with his wind element giving him fast movement speed
Good fanfic. would recommend for something to read when your bored. One of the few issues is the low word count per chapter. Still good tho.
Although at the start i feel this will be meh novel due to info dump! After chap 3, my experience with this fan-fic has webt up through the roof!! Give it a try and i promised you will not be dissatisfied ❤️
A good story that imo is held back by the first halfs love of showing system details. But it got better and I started enjoying it a lot. The system stuff is unfortunate, but it shows the writer is thinking about their story and that shows in all the other parts of the story too. New ways of looking at things, the mc doing things that are perfect for him, etc. Now for a spoiler because I know some people are like me and enjoy MCs that aren't doing the "academy - genin - canon events - plot" thing. As of the latest chapter, the only thing the MC's doing is the plot.
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An easy way to cheese a 5-star review and increase your average rank! I'll take it! Plus I'll take this opportunity to tell you a bit more about this story. So what can you expect from the story? Harem!!!! Nope [img=faceslap] MC possibly not losing most fights? Yes, while he isn't OP in the beginning he will quickly become OP, at least when compared to his peers, if you want him to fight Itachi and Orochimaru after 1 and a half years, then probably not! Civilian MC! Yes!!! This is one of te things I ignored in my previous fic, the prospect of the Sharingan is a bit too tempting, but now that I have gone through that disaster one time, I'll focus on writing a character that has no bloodlines... OP perks!! Yes!! Bloodlines? Noo....
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