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The Strongest Caretaker in Pokémon World (Pokémon Fanfic)
4.43 (20 peringkat)
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Disclaimer: This story is a Pokemon Fanfiction! I didn't owned anything.
A child was raised in the white room. He live in the lonely life and dream to travel outside the room.
Suddenly.
Miracle happened!
His life change with a single dream and made a vow to live freely!
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I almost forgot to give a five star. By the way, good job author it's a good novel. keep it up.😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
I think you used the I have a Pokemon Daycare and other some sort of pokemon concepts into one right? At least, I hope that this will not be as bland as the I have a Pokemon Daycare. I hope you keep up the good work. Good luck. Please don't drop it. Thank you very much.
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Definitely 5 stars, this book is awesome! Keep up the great work I love the way you made the main character. This book is going to become one of my favorite ones.
I like the concept of this novel, but the MC is mentally too young for it to be a enjoyable read for me. Also I get that it's purely a wish fulfillment novel but basically turning your MC into an immortal god right out the gate makes for ether a very short novel or one full of plot holes later on.
You have to work on your writing wuality. The grammar isnt bad but it isnt good either. You can read it but its not really good with the mistakes you made. Your main character is too unfeeling. He doesnt even really mourn the death of his parents. The interaction between the characters up to this point is also too little. I mean you introduce his aunt as the person who tells him of the death of his parents. The Floette also just pops up without explanation. His powers are too much. I mean he gets aura psychic and an additional power? I dont think u will ever use all of them to their full potential. And how did his parents know, he had the potential to learn aura and psychic. U explain to little.
well for start it slow-paced story increase the pace his pokemon really like him so much that give(pokemon x human) vibes length of chapter should be increased (if only one chapter/week) and for end it slow-paced story increase the pace
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Hi you can call me GC, the novel is good, he is not the protagonist or antagonist from the start, your gradually building him. at present it looks like the MC will grow as Master of all trades in Pokemon cause only researching profession is pending for him. Keep It Up.. But Need more frequent updates
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I like it I hope this story will keep updating unlike the other pokemon ff with a good story but poor updating stability keep up the good work HAHAHAHAHAHAH
The pace is so fast that even The Flash wouldn’t be able to keep up. To keep things short, this story is sh*t. Don’t waste your precious time.
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing this book has been especially the OC with how he has run his shop and met so many new pokemon as well as make and have friendships or being a part of the family with them not just that but how he actually and truly cares about all of them and the ideas that were used for all the places for the pokemon living there to use as well how they'll be safe and have freedom wonder what will happen next and what are the pokemon inside of those eggs look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book cant wait
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
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No harem in pokemon story? Is this a blessing? Am I dreaming? Take my 5 stars before I wake up![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Love the book like the simplicity aswell as the complexity of the story in the journey and background that makes you easily enjoy the story and get attached to the world. Currently on like less than around 50 chapters tho but loving the story so far hope for faster updates.
I enjoyed it man keep up the good work. hopefully you continue to update since this has a real good direction. I'm most curious about his parents.
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good story but kind of cringy with a sentinent system... writing is ok the idea is good but how it is made isnt for me i feel just a shudder in my spine then i read it... i dont like a system with intelligence
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