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The Spartan who became a God
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Disclaimer I do not own the right to any image included or the halo franchise and all credit goes to there respective owners I only own characters from Oblivion Team as they are my own Creations
This story is based around a halo fan called John who was reincarnated into the halo universe. the main character will be the same generation Spartan as master chief just that he has been in Cryo due to his destructive abilities as unlike master chief this one was put through more experiments by Halsey giving him abilities beyond the norm so much so that he has to have an Ai that can help control him however as John is a reincarnater he has a system that has modified the Ai so that it help John who goes by the Spartan Name Dark.
This story takes place during Halo 2 and after since he was in Cryo on earth during the events of the first game. The Ais name is Destiny and is represented by a female voice John's Spartan code Is 909 also he uses his Spartan name after reincarnation never using his previous name or the name of the body before becoming a Spartan also due to the system he has he will get stronger over time although he is already powerful also due to the system he is immune to the flood infection as his body is modified by the system making it impossible for flood to control him.
Any constructive criticism is allowed this means suggestion on how I can improve the chapters writing quality also please include an example of you do this so I can see how it's suppose to look thank you in advance also in future I may be open to suggestions on some events but that's in future for now I am currently following the events of Halo 2. Do note I have note read any of Halos extended material this may mean some events in the story may contradict what those say I apologise if so but I only plan to use the events of the games if in future I decide otherwise I will let you know.
You can read ahead on patreon will still upload here but patreon will be ahead. I will try to upload two chapters every week.
for those who want to support and read chapters before those on webnovel you can support me on patreon.
patreon.com/LuciferDark324
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Bro, it's rare to find a Halo fanfic on this page, and even rarer is that you've reached 50 chapters and you won't abandon it. As a fan of the franchise I give you 5 stars. Now, as for criticism, I would recommend that you do not write large paragraphs, perhaps 3-4 lines at most, because it is tiring to the eye. The story, although it is somewhat new, is quite lost in the idea of mixing a world like that of Halo with a fantasy theme of powers like in Strar Wars, so I don't know if many will like it. As a recommendation, I would say that you continue writing until you can finish your fanfic, this will help you perfect your narrative.
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Looks good so far, havent seen halo fics come this far, and the multiverse concept makes it more interesting, altough i wanted to ask Is there a romance in some point?
It’s a ok fic you need a editor thou couple spelling mistakes but that’s all really could use longer chapters thou
Author here informing you that Vol 2 is finished and uploaded on patreon also i will be going through all the chapters on patreon as someone informed me that the paragraph are difficult to read since they are long and have no pause in them. So I will be going through ether separating them or adding commas to make them easier to read this will inevitably delay my time on writing Vol 3, which unlike my original plan will be Dark going back to the halo universe to retrieve some Forerunner tech this was originally supposed to be after the clone wars but I realised it made more sense to happen before since there will not be much time between the empire beginning its conquest of the galaxy. Anyway I hope you enjoy the story I will be uploading 2 chapters for Vol 2 every Tuesday hopefully before I am done i have made the correction on Patreon and can shift the changes to here after then focus on Vol 3.
Author here I know updates have not been as often as I had originally intended a lot has been happening in real life but I have already got up to chapter 54 written and uploaded to patreon. I will be releasing 2 chapters on here every Tuesday but patreon will get more and will always be ahead but I make a promise I will be ensuring that I release at least 2 chapters every week I uploaded 3 last week because of my absence I Thought 2 chapters was not enough content to make up for the time I was away but from this review it will be 2 every Tuesday. all chapters will also contain more than 1200 words so that's 2400 words every Tuesday. I appreciate those who stayed during my absence and hope you enjoy the story.
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