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McKenna is a strong-headed defiant girl who went for what she wants no matter what people think.
she believes there is something called love and that it only made people stupid but she still longed for it.
So she vowed to wait as long as it takes to find the right perfect man that was capable of sweeping her off her feet and together they would ride off into the sunset.
But then she met Jason, a multi billionaire that swept her off her feet quite alright but instead of running off into the sunset, he dropped her inside a gutter.
Now, McKenna has to pick herself up and become better and show Jason he made the worst mistake of his life by breaking her heart.
Follow Jason and Mckenna on their Journey to forget each other. Mckenna out for revenge from the man that broke her heart and Jason determine to do the right thing by staying away from the innocent girl that almost made him break his one rule - he just doesn't do love.
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Jason walked towards the entrance Thokozani mentioned and met a woman there. She was an albino, tall with brown boots and yellow dress. Jason couldn’t make out her face from the distance he was standing.
‘Are you the new help?’ Naya asked without looking up. She was placing plates on the tables.
‘No…I am …’ Jason was puzzled that the albino had an accent
‘Don’t just stand there, start setting dinner plate on the table. We have less than five minutes before dinner’ she said without waiting for Jason to introduce himself.
Jason dropped his briefcase by the door and carried the pile of plates near the window and started distributing across the table. When he got close enough to her, he saw her face. She wasn’t an albino, she was white. And she was stunning.
She looked up and stared at him.
‘You don’t look like a help’ Naya said and her face was expressionless.
‘Probably because I am not, I am Jason and I am your new boss’
Naya stared at him and blinked twice.
‘Do not forget to place the spoons beside the plates, boss’ and she went back to what she was doing, leaving a puzzled Jason to stare at her in shock.
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Tulis ulasanThe book has great potential and I feel like there's passion that the writer put in both characters in the story, I love McKenna and Jason maybe stuck up in chapter one, but he definitely gives a chance at something more than just words and general actions like he did with chapter one so I will be sticking around until the end.
this is a wonderful story, suspense filled and entertaining , I still can not believe it has ended. I really enjoyed me self reading this novel. thanks precious for this piece.
Awesome story! I can't wait to finish reading and see if the lead couple ends up together. Good writing quality the story is fast passed. This book has very good potential!
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A very good story with an interesting plot. The writing formatting and grammar could use some minor improvements. The characters are great and the humor is solid. Dialogue is great. I like the African side of this story, it really makes it stand out. Love scenes are well described and you keep it interesting throughout. Also feel free to check out my fanon spin-off story Avatar: Macai's Journey if you like Action/Adventure stuff (with some romance).
I enjoyed reading this story. It has a good plot line and some very likable characters. I look forward to more chapters from you. Best of luck with the novel, author.
I love the way we see the story through different ML.********************** Jason and McKenna are good for each other just like light and darkness************************************************ truth be told, i am liking this Naya girl and even though i am rooting for Mckenna, i want her to be with Jason as well keep updating!!! it a good read
I liked the protagonist because she seems to be a down-to-heart person, which is not so common in novels. She's loveable in the little things. Unfortunately she's chosen as a toy for a playboy, but I hope he matures once he sees what wonderful woman she is. Promise us, author, he'll not mistreat her too much! I found the pace of this story good and I liked how the events developed in a non forceful way. Although I had problems understanding where the novel is set, it's just me not being well travelled enough LOL. I usually don't like tags announcing the change of POV, when there's such a thing, but it's a peeve of mine. The author writes in a sensible manner, not delivering too much and spoiling the surprises! Good job, good luck!
A love story between a secretry and boss. AWesome A story set in Nigeria. Interesting! A rich guy poor woman trope. Great! This book has all the thingis I want and it's great. The writing quality is excellent. I grabbed some popcorn and read it. It's like watching a drama. Great work!!! Looking forward for more chapters!
I lked it :D
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
I must say that this is a very awesome piece of art , it is very captivating and apt at the same time, the writer did a wonderful work in writing, I can boldly give it a five star ratings.
This is one of the best romance novel out there if you are into that kind of thing ............................... ................................ Jason and mckenna's personality are fresh and not shallow........... It is going to be a good book after the author works out the kinks.....I have added it to my library. Great book!!!!
I have just started reading It and i find it to be highly captivating. The writer has a unique writing style that makes this book so good. Keep up the good work and keep updating.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
it's a good story. i hope Jason will admit his feeling soon before he married another girl. it's kind of frustating me when he still plan to marry other girl
Membuka SPOILERFunny, lighthearted, and enjoyable. Man this book hits different, but to be honest it has a lot of things it has to improve on like its grammar and the way it presents itself. The narration itself and the way the narrative is presented was good with the switching perspectives, but I don't think replaying the same scene serves the purpose that well... not like I could say much about that in my book, but all in all this has been a pretty stellar experience
alright so this is a love story which is not something I read a lot as I more into action, but the story was I interesting in it own way. so keep on wokring on it one day I think it will become a great book.
Two different people meet in a pretty typical encounter. At a first glimpse, it appears a nice light read. But if you watch closely, there is a magical power that the author provides us with: the ability to watch the same scene from different perspectives. It is easy to categorize a person by looks or deeds without knowing its true intent and thoughts. I will be eagerly waiting for new chapters. Good job, author!
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Wow what a superb story err author u r too much . I loved every bit of this story. I would love that you update from time to time in order to get votes and other stuffs.hope to read other novels from you❤️❤️