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The Second Life Of The Warrior
4.51 (41 peringkat)
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WARNING: This is my first fanfic and it is AU of Black Clover, and english isn't my main language, the fanfic will be cliche, the grammar will not be good,big harem,fast pace,overpowered mc and the end is predictable.
Sypnosis: A warrior feared by all the races of his universe is reincarnated in Asta's body by Angels.
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The writing quality is pretty good its very easy to read with little to no mistakes. You update more than most people do a month. The characters feels really dull and lifeless. Asta doesn't even say their name. It's just "Wife", no saying their real names just wife. Then his wives don't call him his name just "Husband. Then he got all of the harem members so fast no real meaning full development. I like who the harem members are but you need to make them have a better love life than just "HuSbAnD" or "WiFe" The background is a harem black clover i just wish it was better
I write this review as one of the thousands of notices that I put, I suppose that if they read it, first of all it is an alternate universe where I will do everything to my liking, and also things would develop quite quickly because more than a fanfic it is a project I'm doing to learn some things. If you don't like things to unfold too quickly or anything typical, don't even bother reading.
dude this is so cliche i almost ate my pillow ๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ก at least not me
The fanfic has great potantioal. It is very interesting to read. The only problem I see is the grammer. There are mistakes like she insted of he or something along the lines, but it is not something that really bothers.
The story is great, but I was a little confused in the latest chapters, he and his wives just invaded the magic knight exams and challenged three captains to a battle, I was very confused in this part, but other than that I have no complaints.
I want lemons ๐ ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญbut it is still good ๐โโโโ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐โ๐๐๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ
Great novel just don't drop.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
It's good๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ
Great novel, this is one of the best black clover fanfic that i have ever read. Every character feels like they have life and emotions. Even Yuno who somehow became an arrogant and villain at first got his redemption and have someone who loves him. Every character too have its own story. The battles are great too and exciting. So for me this is 5 stars. Please keep up the good work๐๐๐๐
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Me encanta esta novela, te darรฉ todas mis piedras! :vvvvv [img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I just have one question.....do you have Nero as a wife? my friend here wanting to know...
Pleasant reading! ............................................................................................................
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Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ๐๐
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐send more chapters please
Guys I made several mistakes in this ff, so i do not recommend to read it I was considering this as a learning project and I made a lot of mistakes and that's a big reason why I don't recommend reading it.