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The Rising of the Holy Swordsman
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Ringkasan
This a story of a man that wanted the shield hero to have a good name so he decided to reincarnate as the shield hero,
But before god reincarnated god let him have a wish and he chose to look and have the power of Moroha Haimura from World Break: Aria of Curse for a Holy Swordsman
Lets see how he can change the world!!.
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2Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Tulis ulasan
This has a good start literally! MC has change the beginning and won't get kick side way by his fellow heros! Also maybe real tam work and also find a way to strengthen all of it without the negative emotion start! Also screw the princesss and king both characters are evil still
Man, that entire synopsis was just a block of text, seriously, sit out to improve your grammar before you start writing in English, let alone posting it online. I enjoy the concept, but, it's only going to be held back by your subpar writing.