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The story of a Titan Prince that seeks the strength to overcome all obstacles
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first time writing so I apologize in advance for any mistakes.
pls I welcome any comments so don't hold back.
English is not my first language.
I dont own anything other than my OC.
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Whilst reading I was constantly distracted by bad grammar and mistakes that are very obvious and easy to correct if you at least read what you have written. The story strikes me as a happy go lucky way of writing, there is no plan behind the plot, or at least it feels like it.
Grammar and the story in general is just a mess. Everyone is apparently “upgraded” which is beyound dumb since batmans whole thing is being human but okay. Too many things going on and too many characters.... story is a complete mess and needs a complete rewrite
me encanta tu mc está muy bien desarrollado su personaje i también deberias introducirlo en el olimpo ya que dado que vas a agregar romance debería ser entre el i wonder woman o una diosa olímpica o asgardianos
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ok good story but it needs some serious editing to make it for a bit better and to touch up the grammar other then that is very readable if not a little clunky so good job author I am definitely interested
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The story would’ve been alot better if all the grammar and spelling mistakes were fixed/edited before The Chapters was posted. Overall great story so far.👍
great story.love it. jjjkicjvJSNDKfjvnzkfdbgnv.izfdglzseodjnicv/zso;lmzfa'PKWkjdnfkj>Bcnvj.da b/vojf:jgkkEM:QOAND:v lkidn/v;oxF@;vln ;ofxkm/A Fc/;
I like the story, the idea of making him a Titan and giving him powers and wishes like titan force ecx. Thanks for your hard work so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. Great work and great story and can't wait to read your next chapters