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The Record of Orc Civilization
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In the treacherous Bog forest, danger lurked as a dense white mist blinded eyes and chilling air froze souls. At dawn, ferocious, mutated creatures roamed, seeking prey.
The weakest species, Monster Species, struggled amid magic-wielding mages. They hid in caves and lairs to evade magical rulers, but hiding wasn't enough.
Transmigrated as an orc named Moku, a former MMA champion, sought superpowers through rituals and lore to make himself and his tribe stronger.
With an unyielding promise, Moku vowed to wage war against those underestimating Monster Species. In a world of magic and peril, his journey for empowerment and revenge had just begun. Join Moku in this gripping fantasy, battling limitations and prejudice to face his destiny in the Bog forest.
{Disclaimer:
This novel will be the basis or background story of all the subsequent novels that I will write.
English is not my first language and this is the first novel I've written. So if there are any mistakes in writing or language that are difficult to understand, please understand.
I will keep trying to be a better writer. And you can see the changes in my writing style from chapter to chapter.
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I must sincerely apologize for the prolonged silence and lack of updates. I want to be honest with you—I faced burnout, a challenge that I didn't anticipate as a first-time writer, especially in the realm of online writing for Webnovel. "The Record of Orc Civilization" is my inaugural book, and navigating the demands of completion proved more demanding than I expected.
To my dedicated readers who have patiently awaited updates, I extend my deepest gratitude for not abandoning this admittedly sluggish writer. To those who have recently joined this journey, your presence is invaluable, providing the motivation I desperately need to continue this story.
I acknowledge my shortcomings and assure you that I am committed to finishing this book. I understand the disappointment my delay may have caused, and I'm determined not to let you down any further.
In an effort to make amends, I pledge to upload 2-3 chapters each week. Your patience with this novice writer means the world to me, and I am genuinely grateful for your understanding. Thank you for being part of this journey, and I hope you'll continue to accompany me as we navigate the unfolding narrative together.}
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Story is okay but ima drop it and remove from libary. MC Reincarnated as an orc with all his memories. does some exploration and stuff. Was okay, the hardcore simping for the females is a major No No for me.
the story is entertaining and you can see the effort of the author, plus you can also see that he wants to promote his culture, but in my opinion, doing this practically shot himself in the foot, greatly reducing the audience, since there are many words that are practically the movement of his martial art and weapons, ranks, that the author puts them with names that as readers we are not used to, since practically when reading several novels, one forgets what that name and movement represented (did I understand myself here?) , and it's annoying. Also, the "MC" wasn't an MMA fighter? Because he practically only uses the martial art of his hometown? Can't he use others as well or try to combine them all like some manga characters do, becoming stronger like that? like garou from one punch man, some characters from kengan asura, and baki from baki. Also, the cultivation system of the mc and possibly the orc race is interesting, but I think it just unnecessarily complicates things when they can easily have a simpler cultivation system like most cultivation novels or Japanese magic novels, and As far as it goes, there is not much development of the mc's story, the creation of the world is good, but very, very slow. I will leave the novel here, it is good, but it bothers too much the names that the author of his culture uses, since one forgets their meanings, and I think that happens to most readers, and they end up abandoning it and only a few read it. read, or maybe it's just me, and that's why I think the author practically shot himself in the foot, although that part could be fixed with editing, using more general names that are understood by most, and in parentheses the author puts as he calls him originally, I think that with that he could have more readers, and the orc farming system, although interesting, is very complicated in my opinion, and could be simpler. martial arts were born out of the need of the weak to defend themselves from the strong, in itself the martial arts are to protect you. Thank you for your attention.
It’s not worth it. There is no plot. 40 chapters, and there is not a lot of story progression. The author focuses too much on trying to world build by telling (not showing) us the history of things that have happened. They do not focus on the characers. Speaking on the characters, the real main character appears to be Anna as the author spends most of their time with her and her perspective. Which would be fine if the synopsis or initial part of the story sold it as such. No, it feels like it was switched on you halfway through. I read despite the terrible writing quality that only gets slightly better after chapter 11. Even though the story has great promise, I realized its not worth my time. And I am reading the free chapters. If I had to unlock chapters to read more world building with no story progression or about their tribe hunting… would not happen. There is no kingdom building when I stopped reading.
While there are some spelling and word errors here and there. This book is absolutely amazing and the power system is awesome. I really love this story. hfisadgofia sdgnifasdgfjgasdfh
The writing quality is decent, the author does this EX: “Nevare get over here!” Anne runs over there.” It’s very annoying. The MCs emotions are training and being more humane than other orcs. Zero character development 41 chapters in. Overall mid novel
I can not hate it as a novel but I hate the concept and the presentation ... Mr. Author is talented but then he is writing a story about a very superficial guy ... A guy who only want to fight and that is it, there is nothing deeper than that in the 100 chapters I read, he is not only a monster (which I barely accepted) but he is also a selfish one (and this the last nail in the coffin for me), I can not simply accept this anymore. Another thing that needs to be addressed is the way he "always" finds himself fighting someone stronger than him after every upgrade, this old cliche is already a dead concept. I hope to see better work from the author.
this was a great book at the beginning, but seriously it delved into a troupe , human in monster skin, no true world building, as we barely know much about it. then lest not talk about Anna, it's her story apparently 🤷. but moku our "Supposed MC" isn't really likable, but you don't hate him he's just boring & closed minded. then you all these forms with different ideologies & background that truly isn't necessary to explain them in such detail; too much trying to promote his culture with the naming sense (Author him/herself). levels & ranks are too complicated , & too much emphasis on moku's power , not necessarily moku himself as growth in character. no is he allowing his other Main Orcs get Character Development. Orcs being in shambles (Crying) because his brother died is blasphemy , they are Raging creatures where killing is second nature death of those near is nothing new , they knew this before moku even came to their world. these aren't Orcs , Not Monsters , but just Green Humans smh 🤦 & please for the love of the readers who probably still read this , stop saying "Moku this Moku that each sentence. here's an example Moku looked up at his assailant, gauging the distance from which he could strike. Then he took a stance and activated his "Such & Such" form.
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a good book with a beautiful world in it. I hope BugatiCatForm can keep his continues update. But sometimes I wonder this book about matrial art fantasy or romance and the love story between Anna and Moku to much sugar for my taste. (lol) I really don't know how the writter can keep up with the progres of story' because it's too much complex and i hope the complexity become this novel advantage not a weakness
as a read more and more is not a story about some mma orc its about Anna the humen swordwomen thats turn to she orc and her 4 girlfriend big disappointment
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Definitely not recommend, this have a lot of unnecessary details that just are the joy of few and the annoy of the rest. the grammar is so-so with chaps that are just awful, the plot is medium good but with a enormous lack of realistic flow. Is fantasy yes, but the Author put real martial arts that lack reality instead of make a fake one that fix in the fantasy. Then the girls plot flow in the novel... pfft more cheap cr*p, tou in tou is a waste of time.
World building is good. Kind of hard to understand different words and culture at times. Also there is romance but dont think of good, caring romance. Its more of hoping the women will breed his children and thats it. MC isnt some hero. I would call him a Villan actually. He uses everyone around him to accomplish his goals. He has no Rremorse for other orcs or anyone that im aware of. Still a solid read so far just pretty slow at times but still interesting.
ok it's a greatd book and has a lot of potential, but every time i get Hooked. some npc character backstory i dont need the back story of 2 slave traders that are going to die in the next 2-3 chapters. and it's like 5-6 chapter backstory. i can understand a backstory about 1 chapter or less long just to get the general vibe.specially if they are going to die soon. it just stops the flow of the story. it's already switching POV like crazy don't need random background on random NPCS.
Harem? Just wondering Is there going to be any romance and a good harem in the story? Also while I'm asking questions. How much of the story will be focused on the kingdom building?
hey author love your story keep it up it is very nice story can you pls upload a map of kingdoms sometime I got confuse by locations .and keep it up i will support with power stones
Writing Quality : I must say it was quite good on the first few chapters but no, grammar, spelling, it was all bad. Your way of writing is also very chaotic. You keep changing perspective per perspective, leave plots hanging, you leave to much information which sometimes becomes redundant. You need to bring this all together.Story Development : It was very good for you make Moku your mc with it based on your synopsis, but you made a bad move, you change thr main characters perspective to another. And also you cant't justify you word of making in as record of the orc civilization because halfway through the novel you change perspective to human development, history and all that, which give me irked. Its not even story anymore, its a book of description. The later chapters focus more on information dumps which Is very unlikable. Character Design : I dont't even know what to say, abandoning first main character perspective and just leaving it on the plot armour disgust me, I hate it. Authors like you are incompetent.Updating Stability : No CommentWorld Background : Clear and unclear at the same time. You give too much details but not description, you're writing is more of whats going on, not what it is or whatever it was.REMARKS: Anyway you probably fattened your chapters because money, idk what to say. But your writing needs more improvmement. If this is your first book then congrats, your grammar and english might not be much but atleast you bring a world for us readers not like those out-of-spite novels. I wish you good luck in your next book. And if you want to be a great writer, webnobel might not be for you, money shackles the mind Author. Thankyou.
this is basically a chinese novel... 80% info, 20% story..... basically a book full of information and barely a story... it even cuts from the main character to an irrelivant npc.... best not to read this book as it sux at keeping the flow of the story and descends to giving info dumps to up the word count
Uma historia incrivel realmente me prendeu nos primeiros capitulos recomendo muito que leiao essa obra prima . Eu procurava cobre e encontrei ouro .
By God this is an amazing novel, might just be the first book I waste my 1 useless power stone on.