The Pict Magic Of Fairy Tail

LV 4

Humbuub

I'll be blunt, this is boring. Your MC is bland, his magic has a lot of potential but you went with "sCiEncE iS m4g1c" bullshit.

LV 4

uchiha_satoru

hopefully he can become like Rill from Black Clover

LV 13

The_Facts

Read seven chapters in, there is nothing good about this story so far. You seriously need to explain what is going on in the story, at first you said he had a cheat power, then he had an information downloading system, you explained the main character's magic at least three different ways, changing what it does every time and you started the story off in a bad direction. If you had the power to copy any one magic of a person, as a child, you should just run straight in the guild and collide with someone you know has good magic, and then explain it away by that you were too excited about finally being able to join a magic guild or whatever. That's it, it's that simple. Not whatever this is.

LV 13

JiangDao

This book is incredibly well written and executed quite well. It’s still very early of course and so the current chapters aren’t the most exciting but it is still very enjoyable and relaxing to read. Please keep writing Author, you are very talented and don’t feel the need to rush or drop due to criticism.

LV 4

Propht

I’m not really writing anything new but, yeah this story is just a let down. From the way he acquired his magic being done somewhat poorly, to the fact it “Evolved” when everything about it is worse then the original which is incorrect compared to canon since he says Reese’s can only draw on himself which is wrong, to the forcing science into the magic, and finally to the Cheat suddenly being able to deliver relevant information about whatever the mc needs. I feel like the author was going for a Naruto: Wind Calamity but made a bad choice in both the world and delivery of it, since fairy tails magic is mainly emotion driven, and instead of focusing on magic itself he changed the magic to science so he could make it complicated without making the mc op, which might not have been a problem if this wasn’t to make the magic reach a usable level. What do I mean? The mc in order to make a knife that can even cut anything he must know its atomic structure, which implies he can’t create anything too complicated like a living being or anything that doesn’t exist like Reedus can since they don’t have an atomic structure. If you were going to “evolve” his magic then you should’ve added a function like sealing or a copy ability so he can spam his creations.