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////Most of you might have or had a crush when you were in school, to whom you never proposed either because of the circumstances or sacred of being rejected by them. May be an innocent crush on someone is a secret to everyone but your close friend with whom you share almost every little thing. Just one glance at our crush would make the day brighter for better. But having a crush is incomplete without having a friend with a dirty mind but a good heart.

This is a love story of Jessica Olsen who has a crush on the school's popular guy Austin Ames.

This story is a kind of slow romance genre, give it a try if you want to read a feel good story. A story that can make you smile and blush. You are being warned since there are 18+scenes too, hope you guys like it.

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The place where I was standing, it was silent yet a perfect bliss. I saw the moon was shining bright and the stars twinkling in the sky, the roads were empty with flickering streetlights and children were playing. I could hear the sound of breeze and the trees swaying in a rhythm, it made me feel euphoric.

I was startled by hearing a voice from behind, it was a voice which makes my heart flutter. And in that silent night hearing his voice made me feel like a morning coffee which was deep and addicting.

I knew who it was, I turned back and looked at Austin. He wore a white shirt and a black jeans, his thick black and light brown hair was shining as always.

As the wind blew through my hair, I tucked it behind my ear.

"Beautiful," I heard him saying and when I looked at him I saw him looking at the stars.

"Indeed," I replied and finished my juice in one gulp.

He was looking only at the stars and admiring them while I was looking at the stars and at him.





//I DO NOT OWN THE COVER ///



This is my first novel. Hope you guys like it and if possible support me.

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Ruchi_Kaur

I just like the novel and love to read when ever it's update I never miss to read the first novel I have regarding all School and childhood memories..all ..so I recommend readers to read it ...you will find very interesting and good...

5yr
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daisylaisy

I found this one day and thought of giving it a try since it was about school ...I felt like daamnnnn , this reminds me of my school days , I'm waiting for more updates and I'm really really in love with this story I can totally imagine me in those characters ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I hope Jessica confess to Austin and they have a happy ending .

5yr
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Dhanya_Kurup

Simple and cute love story. Fell in love with the characters. Author has made sure to avoid any grammatical mistakes. Loved the book. All the best dear author for your future novels.

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bhagii

This is really sweet love story which reminds about childhood crush... I was hooked up with this novel ...its truly worth reading..even though its first novel for author...she was so good at writing..

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kaushee
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This novel is so sweet. I love it. Very good novel. Feel very nice after reading it. Love the ML and FL. Both are very cute with unique personalities. Very refreshing to read this novel. I love FL parents, how they try to cover for her mistake. I also like ML mother, how she understand her son and his heart. Feels very nice to read this and very expected about what's going to happen next. Good novel.

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eddyblu
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I loved this book soo much ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜. This book made me realize, there is no right or wrong rather we are all right in our own point of view and just because we feel we are rigt doesn't mean others are after all we are just selfish.

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Alankrita_Upadhyay

Awesome novel remind everyone to their school time first crush.this is slow romance genre with pure love and innocence of teenagers who decide to develop their love love also in future.

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Queenzie_

I love this story plz write more stories author ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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Namratha_Putla

The best story.... The author's elevation of every character was super cute and awesome.Its a feel good story and was pushing me to my imaginations... And it's making us remember our school days... Ending for every chapter is awesome and.. Its sometimes giving me a goosebumps... Fell in love with your story author... Im not able to stay still without appreciating your story... Lotz of love ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธ

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rachitapampala

One of the finest and pure stories ever written โค๏ธ every chapter has its own beauty and the best part is that the story resembles atleast one situation of everybody's real life experiences. Looking forward to the coming chapters. Keep going ๐Ÿ˜˜

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Navya26

I'm in love with this novel and waiting for Jessica to express her love to Austin , I hope they have a happy ending . School days always have a special place in our hearts โค

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sweetheartgaya

What a good novel! I hope you can post more chapters and updates. I'm interested of the main characters story. Please author give us a good good story ahead of this novel.

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preneeti

I like your cover and the story it is base on normal people life .Specially the school life the phase which come in everyone life which anyone relate .excited to read this story and future development of Story and i like the story to Muchhhhh... ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

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redrosebutterfly

This story is really cute โค Reminds me of my school days ๐Ÿ’ฏ and my first crush โคโคโค Hope you continue till the end and update the chapters soon๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Jaayo!!!

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keersam

The story is amazing........ This is the first time im gifving a review for a novel..... i love the story waitig for more updates ............ waiting for more scenes of ML and the FL .......

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abuzbwq_4

Story is really good โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ There are few mistakes but that's okay , we can understand...... Waiting for more updates ....... I love Justin's character ๐Ÿ’˜

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shezz1

Nice story, female lead and male lead are good but still i love the FL's cousin, he is really funny and cute. Waiting to see more and how they will end up together..this novel reminds me of the time I had one sidded crush. I can totally relate I really really love the work.. Looking forward for more... Keep working hard author ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜

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Dipster
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I like the simple, no non-sense story-line. I also like how the author has shown the relationship between cousins and friends. Jealousy among friends and subsequent misunderstandings are all a part of ****-age lives and that has been well-depicted. While i applaud the author for taking the plunge and giving to her desire to write, i feel that better writing quality in terms of more attention to grammar ( direct speech, indirect speech, tenses) would let her reach a much wider audience.

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Ruchi_Kaur

It is one of the best novel I have read!!!!! liked it....just one word outstanding!!!!! author hardwork can be seen!!! Keep updating more and chapters!!!! fighting

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SATVINDER_KAUR

Childhood crush , best friends and all the school journey it reminds everyone of there schooling days ... addicted to this novel...hope to can have more and more chapters to read please update more on weekends..... outstanding!! work of author....ATB...keep updating

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