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The Never Ending Market.
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How far can your imagination truly extend?
What are the most outlandish ideas you've ever considered?
To what depth can your mind explore?
What if I told you, there exists a place that caters to the unimaginable, stretching beyond the limits of even the most extraordinary thinkers...
What if I told you, that there was a venue that meets all your unexplored needs, a vast space that expands infinitely, challenging your understanding with each step deeper...
What if I told you, that there was a hub where diverse worlds intersect, sharing ideas and exploring the unknown to discover new realms of creativity...
What if I told you, that this place was just a hypermarket...
Would you believe it?
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before you read:
DISCLAIMER: I DONT OWN ANY OF THE CHARACTERS MENTIONED BESIDES THE ORIGINAL CHARACTERS.
heads up. Market stuff starts at 1 and 2, and starts again at 13 onwards. 3~12 chapters is a world adventure.
keywords: slow/moderate pace, mystery, world hopping, multiple OCs, multiple POV, LitRPG, system, world adventures, mainstream media, non mainstream media, detailed writing, power scaling, weak to strong, moderate/slightly heavy market information,
This is a test drive as it's my first writing, comments and or reviews based on improvement are highly welcomed.
updates are unstable. but I will never drop this fanfiction whatsoever until I finish it, I have an idea on how to end this and planned around. enjoy.
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great concept and decent grammar but there's too many pov, it would have been fine but some of the pov is unrelated to the current situation of the mc which really throws off the immersion of the story.
So far, the novel is very interesting. It's a new concept that I've never seen before, and from what I see, it has a lot of potential. The writing of the author is very good and with goo grammer, although sometimes it can get confusing when there are no POV's assigned, so I don't know whom are we talking about. But overall, very good, plz keep it up.👍🏼
its a very good story, in most of stories about a multiversal shop, coffee shop or restaurant, they dont care at all about the lore behind the place they work, but this fic fully make use of that part and its super fin to read it ive read alot of stories about multiversal places like a coffee shop, restaurants and shops but this is the best fic ive read about this genre about the other aspect of the fic like characters, world development and other things are simply perfect 10/10
A concept that I wish was used more. As for the story pretty interesting honestly would love to read more.
Overall i like it. It's a good Story with an interesting idea, but it seems really jumpy and disconnected sometimes. Some of the flashbacks of of random background characters are boring to me instead of aiding in worldbulding because some of them will probably never be mentioned again.
so far storys great only complaint is the new chapter update takes a while but still really good story and unique as far as. Well done keep up the good story
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good so far, reminds me of the infinite ikea scp in some ways. Also, I wonder if he can move the entrance of the store now that he has exited
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