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The Mysterious Evolution

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Penulis: Biva

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The most anomaly and secretive scientific project in history, VILER-D was announced to be halted because of failure. No human trial of the experiment remained alive. Unexpectedly at the last moment before it completely shut down, an infant of fifteen weeks was found alive. Nobody knew if the baby would even be alive or what cruelty would it face along....
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The secrets of having superpowers and highly sensitive senses have haunted me for a long time.

I feel as if someone is controlling my mind and body. My feelings, reactions and character modifies with the passage of time.

After surviving the attempted assassination, I, Biva, found clues regarding my abnormality.

I disguised myself to live peacefully without disturbances. But sadly, to survive in the cruel world, finding my identity and eliminate the danger is the only choice.

So I have to strike back, be ruthless, and take revenge on those who hurt me or my dearest one.

I don't want to live as a prisoner, I aspire to be free and soar in the sky.

Despite everything, someone in the dark, my shadow or illusion attempts to deprive me of my desires.

Will my wish to find my parents, feel unconditional love and care ever be fulfilled?

## Join me in my journey to find out.##

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"Biva, did you have a hand in the destruction of Wega?"

"Why only a hand? I solely destroyed it."

"WHAT? That was my blood, sweat, and tears; my entire life; WHY? Are you a psychopath, Biva?"

"Maybe I am....."
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Note: This is an original story written by me.
Disclaimer: The cover is edited by me but I don't own the pictures. Credit goes to the owner.

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Nikola_Niko

Before anything, Author why did you write tge first chapter in third-person and the second chapter in first-person prespective? 😅 Anyways, the story is finely written, typos here and there but nothing too much of a problem. The mc seems somewhat cocky and arrogant type to me, can’t say i hate or love that, since she was (only my guess) bullied due to her special circumstances. Anyways, Nice work author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]

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Lu_Shui
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Captivating first chapter that introduced the MC in a dire state. I was kept on my toes as I wondered whether she would survive or not. Thankfully she did survive in a mysterious way and she planned to find out what happened to her. The intensity of the first chapter was watered down in the following chapters. Focus and character personality seem to change somewhat. Proper editing would do the story wonders as minor typing and wording mistakes often takes the joy away from reading. Other than that, a job well done 👍

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LoveQ
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This novel was amazing. A fresh breath indeed away from all one genre. I like the FL, She wasn't all cold, despite so much suffering. She has her sides too, intresting ones. You are brilliant author to write this story.....keep the hard work going on...

2yr
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Arstorm

This is really one hck of novels... honestly, it keep hanging there to find out, what next. The pace is great & how it intristically mde you want more & more. kudo's to author... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] keep it up.

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Aanchal_Basnet

From the starting line of the story. It Tooks me into story (imaginative) world..The story and main character Bive is amazing, fearless and unbelievable... Story line makes reader hooked and suspense... Thank you amazing story😀 Really very excited for more........

2yr
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bunnyrabbit

Writing Quality: At first, it was written in a third-person perspective and shifted to first-person in the second chap. This technique is very easy to mess up but the author pulled it off. The narration paints images in our minds. Not overly descriptive nor too less. Just enough. Story Development: It started with a woman being injured. And if I'm understanding it right, she has a regeneration skill. Since I haven't read that far ahead yet, I wonder if magic was normal in this world. Or were the monks she's living with know about it, at least? Stability of Updates: So far so good. Character Design: I couldn't say much at this point because as I said, I haven't read that far ahead yet. But looking at the first three chaps, I have the impression of her as an aloof type of person. She doesn't like to interact with people very much which made me wonder if she had any traumatic experience with dealing with people considering she was injured so badly in the opening scene. Or was that just her personality? World-Building: What I LOVE about this was the world-building wasn't thrown as an exposition but instead, given to us bits by bits. I love it that way as it gives me a sense that the author trusts its readers. [Keep it up, Author.]

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pupa23

Oh Biva it's a good and unique story. gives a different feeling from being bored and yeah some first chapter are very simple but the story development afterwards are very interesting.

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Dere_Isaac

I love what u did there . .it's not rushed and not slow. this is a nice book. And grammar is just top notch. I will say that the only down side might be the updating stability .... drop more pls

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Elona_Alone

From the Blurb alone I already became intrigued by this wonderful masterpiece . The writer did a great job to come up with such wonderful novel. Each chapter is interesting that you would find yourself glue to the novel. This is a must read, and please kindly update author 🥺🥺

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ZeroX0666

This is a great story, i really like the way the characters are used to tell the story and they don't seem 1 sided or plain boring. Lots of chapters so far to binge, but I look forward to more to come.

2yr
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lohse_
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Liking this novel so far! The beginning chapter is really well done, and I am glad the author doesn't leave the readers hanging for character names in following chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next!

2yr
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Rainbowprincess

The synopsis of the book is amazing, it was worth reading. I love the words and characters, can't wait for more uupdates. Good luck on your contest.

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Kara_wish_writes

the sypnosis of this book is amazing and prologue us enough to get any science fiction fans hooked though the journey of fl is filled with thorns but she gains some amazing experience in it.

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InstaMoist

When I first heard about the story, I thought the main character would be genderless. Because the incident at the beginning was explained in a clear and concise way, I had a good idea of the basic plot. This is important because many authors tend to dump information immediately in the hope that the reader will immediately understand what they want. The world is interesting and rife with intrigue, and the exchanges between the characters are well-developed, allowing me to relax while I'm reading it. It's just a matter of personal preference, but I tend to enjoy stories with more of a meandering progression of events, so perhaps that's why I found the rapid transitions between settings to be a little disconcerting. Also, a lot of things happened all at once. You can decide for yourself if this book is worth your time by giving it a chance.

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DonutLuver

what an action packed adventure! author does a great job describing superpowers and they handle the dark mood with light moments really well. Although it's romance - they balance that with enough action to keep the chapters and story engaging.

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_Rockbison_

It is a nice story l must sayy.... The writting quality is very good... And the story as well is nice... Keep it up author ....l wish u a very successful future.

2yr
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Favzy
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Sypnosis is eye-catching. The novel is intriguing. I recommend this novel so much 🙂 Waiting for more chapters here Good work author!!

2yr
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babydragon25

The first chapter was magical. I wanted to know if the MC would die but she didn't and the rest was just epic. It was like I was watching a movie where I was kept in suspense. I could imagine everything in my head. Signs of this novel being a big hit

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jungkooks_luna

Bravo author!!! What a great start..it's pretty so interesting The character development, the plot the world background are so interesting looking forward for more and more

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Mary_Onaduja

This book is very interesting bravo😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. It helps me with boredom. I'd recommend this story for both readers and writers. Read this story and get stuck in it please.

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