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Ambitious, focused, I just want to realize my dream. I want to become Better. To be a legend. The door God. That's what they call me.
In summer 2003 I left for a new beginning, a new adventure.
Ajax, This is where it all begins.
Penggemar
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3Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Tulis ulasan
do you have a schedule for this? aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
This book is either a truly terrible translation or written by an ESL author. If it's the second, kudos to you for having the sheer balls to attempt a novel in a foreign language. May I suggest a spellchecker like Grammarly (the free version is enough to fix most egregious typos) to improve the flow of the tale? Right now it's pretty hard to enjoy.
I really like this book Is the author your original work?🤪🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩