The Guardian [English]

LV 5

Evil_Warlord

First the five stars! What do I have to say about this story? First of all, it's published in Spanish and you can find it on my profile or by searching it as "The Guardian [Spanish/Español]" What can I say about the story? I'll start with the negative first. It's a slow story, the whole first volume develops different themes, presenting different characters and the world. It talks a little bit about the past, but it never develops as it should, which makes the readers who want to know the truth, wait. That also means that there are quite a few undiscovered mysteries that remain present from the beginning and are not solved in the first volume. Regardless of what I, as an author, wish to show, this can be considered a negative point. Another negative point in English work, is that I am not good at speaking this language so you will find mistakes, which I will try to correct. (Be warned). The points in favor. It is difficult to be 'objective' so I will not be. I have developed the 'land' in a different way, including magic elements and skills, trying to see the 'world' as that... A 'world' and not just some countries, or the interests of a few. So during the history it develops in different places, some places very changed from the present and others similar, but in the end different in several ways. I have tried to represent these cultures as best I can, but in the end, it is up to the readers to define whether I have succeeded in getting it right even in a small way. As for the secondary characters, they are present, they have their story and their moment, along with a future development, trying not to make the story feel empty or only focused on the main characters. Of course, the main character also has her development and her story, but her past during the first volume is left out and only small details are shown, without being told. In this story, the past will also be told and will be developed in volume 2 into a parallel story of several chapters intertwined with the main story. Maybe there are more faults or points in favor, but that's what I can say now. All that remains is... Venture into this wonderful world that is the earth, an earth changed by magical energy, monsters, and people themselves. A land that was connected to another world that everyone assumed was a game and ended up being real. A world where countries fell, rose, and joined together to survive. Where mountains spread, where islands sank, deserts expanded and where huge forests appeared covering whole countries, all because of the magic energy. Following the adventure of Aurora whose life, values, and attitude will be known in due course along with the secrets, its virtues, and its defects. Venture to read "The Guardian".