Bab 213: The Dawn - Precious
Within his well-lit manor, Darwin sat seemingly unwinding while being fed some grapes. To his side, Laura sexily dressed in revealing unmentionables snuggled next to him.
"Well done my little precious. I knew my faith could be placed in you. Hopefully, you didn't make the fellow burst a blood vessel before his time."
Darwin somewhat chuckled remembering the face of the one who dared to make a mockery while in his presence.
Did he really think there would no repercussions for his action of going against a superior being? He then continued his monologue,
"At this moment I suspect the poison is about to show its true face. How I wish I could have seen the look in his eyes when realizing his demise. Dying in a pool of his own vomit."
He then squeezed Laura's cheeks as she bit her lips before replying with infatuation in her eyes,
PERTIMBANGAN PENCIPTA 
Lord_of_sleep
Lord_of_sleep A very short chapter by my standards but if you realize i normally stop writing when feeling the chapter has accomplished what I intended.
The core focus of the chapter was Darwin's final moments with Laura. I wanted him to experience varying emotions and the same for Laura though they are both despicable beings.
Would there being any sadness for Laura in her final moments by the readers though she was only just introduced? Would she regret her decisions or be happy her final moments were spent with him?
How would Darwin feel knowing he was once more made a fool of by someone he saw as inferior. This time not in strength but wit.
Once more I am babbling on but I truly hoped you enjoyed it.
A suggestion is to read the last three chapters including this one.
Creation is hard, cheer me up!
Hadiah
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