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The Food Sage
4.78 (13 peringkat)
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The wonderful adventures of Jacob Cardona.
Follow Jacob as he travels the world and beyond to discover the path that belongs to him and him alone.
Learning from his mistakes and making new friends along the way, Jacob sees the world in a brand new light.
Watch the arrival of the Food Sage with open arms and plates full of delicious foods everywhere along the way in this jam packed adventure.
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Happy I tried this out. I was on the fence about this, but took a chance. The writing is easy to read and like it so far. Hope for daily updates. Thanks author!
This review is just for people to know my discord name. My discord is right below (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎) Discord: immortalnoob #5203
1, 2 , 3, 4 how many stars am i gonna score? u get 4, 4 stars thats how much u get u get 4 stars why? cus i said so heres 4 stars so heres 4 stars i feel like its decent so heres 4stars 4 stars 4stars 4st
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Interesting! Like the world and the people so far. Jacob's adventure sounds like its gonna be a hell of a ride! I hope things get all Toriko on us :P Keep it up and Ganbatte~
I can’t wait to find out what you have in store for Jacob! Hoping we’ll get to more of the foodstuff soon. Keep up the good work! I greatly enjoyed your novel 🙃
Moar! moar chapters (not really doing this for character count) i give dis novel 5 stars author good job more words for 140 characters sgsdgsfddfsf (i did this to support author havent read most of it yet)
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Thanks for the updates! I can tell that you are getting better as the story progresses. Keep it up and please don't drop this! Can't wait to see what happens next.
I want more Give me more More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More A lot more
Overall your story was pretty slow paced and had errors grammatically but still pretty good work for a starting novel. I suggest just go read up on more vocabularies to increase your word arsenal. Sometimes i feel like certain words if exchanged with what you written it will drastically improve the novel itself. Your story actually has great potential so keep up yeah.
Although this novel is going at a slow pace, that's expected since it only has 1 chapter. I hope that the author can advance the story at a progressing pace and make this story with all of his love and care.
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suggestion: please make a good synopsis. I often see many novels have good writing and plot but don't have good synopsis which completely bury their novel among other novels. U must know the first thing reader see is cover and then synopsis so by not making good synopsis it's just the same as not making any door in ur house for people to enter.