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The Dysfunctional World

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Penulis: Devesh_Goyalji

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[It is a fresh and completely unexplored story]
[I warn the readers that if you read the story, than you risk your heart being crushed with pain.]

Heena's mother was a widow who was cast aside by the society. As Heena grew up she had to deal with everything like her mother but one day an unknown guest arrives at their doorstep. Suddenly their life takes a big turn. Who is this person, why and how did he change Heena's life forever. Is it for good or bad?

“There is a lot going on, and it is a rather suspenseful story, so I would prefer it if you read it.”

Also, leave your valuable suggestions for me to improve.
Thanks for your time.

[New Chapters added every Monday 12:00 PM]

[This novel will have I only a few chapters and no, I shall not drop it anyhow, even if I am dying I shall complete this novel. After all this novel is just the setting or prelude for the actual story to begin with.]

[It is a weekly release, so things will take time to progress, so be patient. By the time i shall also develop my skills and bring out the best in what is to come.]

[I completely own the cover image but still if you want you can download it from my deviant profile :
https://www.deviantart.com/bonygo/]

This novel is also available to read on Tapas with a lot more illustrations so the readers can also opt to read it.

For Business contact me at : Deveshgoyalg@gmail.com

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Ink_Quanta

It seems nice all over but the paragraphs should have some space b/w them I guess...or else it will be pretty much boring....but it seems very nice the way everything is deeply described...and kinda contains a message...so nice one!

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devesg

I am waiting for the next chapter eagerly. I presume the write is a newbie but still the story is good.

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Devesh_Goyalji

Its not good to rate your book but I believe the story absolutely is worth the rating but my way of writing may not be. I am new in writing business and am trying to learn as I write. I hope you like it or if you don't than don't just go. leave a 1 star review but do leave one.

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