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Bab 1: Chapter 1: Rebirth at the nexus

After reading the letter that Rayla is going to seach for Viren without him he broke down crying. He put his clothes on and runs outside of the room. While running towards the Moon Nexus he sees Ezran an asks. "EZRAN did you see Rayla. Ezran replying "No I didn't see her"

Noticing that his big brother was in distrest he asks " What is wrong Callum. Everything Okay?". "No everything is not okay" screamed Callum. "Rayla just left when we would search for him together how could she do this".

Before Ezran could reply Callum ran up the stairs of the Moon Nexus. At the top of the nexus screaming at his fullest " RAYLA WHERE ARE YOU. RAYLA". Searching for hours around the moon nexus and the mountain he cried. "Rayla how could you do this to me. We have been through so much and this is how you betray my trust". Walking down the mountain it began to rain.

" Why. Just Why did she do this. We could have talked about this. She could tell me what was wrong". While crying and mumbling in the rain it began to storm. Realizing that it began to storm Callum ran up towards the nexus. When running up he misplaced his foot and fell. He fell on some ruble and stone. Finally when he was done rolling he fell with his head on the stone plateau beneath him. In his dying breath he mumbled "Rayla just why. Why.". Then suddenly he was struck by lightning.

Ezran with Soran and Lujanne searched for Callum. "CALLUM. CALLUM WHERE ARE YOU." screamed Ezran. "STEP PRINCE WHERE ARE YOU." Said Soren while searching. "HUMAN WHERE ARE YOU" Said Lujanne. After a while of searching and screaming they found an barely alive Callum with blood comming from his head.

"CALLUM. CALLUM ARE YOU OKAY? SAY SOMETHING PLEASE" said Ezran in anguish. Soren and Lujanne shocked of what they saw they immediately took action and carried Callum to the moon Nexus.

1 Month later:

Ezran visible looked very malnourished. He hasn't left Callums side after what happened. Bait was laying beside Ezran trying to comfort him. Ezran asked Corvus and Opelli to look after Katolis while he was staying with Callum. While he was here waiting for Callum to recover he also got visitors. His aunt Amaya brought al kinds of medicine. Ibis the sky mage brought some herbs to help him recover. The others also visited but left quickly to help Katolis recover from it's loses.

While thinking what happened the past month Ezran suddenly see movement. He sees Callum slowely opening his eyes. Ezran cries and says"Callum you are finally awake. I thought you would never wake up again. How are you? Do you need something to eat, drink or anything else?". While crying and asking questions Callum fully opened his eyes. " Hello little brother. Can you tell me where I am?".


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