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The Day Embarrass The Night
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Everyday is a new. Some people have bad day some people have good day some people discover new things .But at the night we all think what we done in hole day . we think about our happy moments , our embarss moments,our sad moments and our new moments.
The story is about a girl.who at her age she discover new things.new peoples .
-- Hadiah diterima 
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Power 
-- Power
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2Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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i like it, quite casual ,keep it up❤️her writing style is casual , so it's easy to understand , needs lil bit grammar imporve , storyline its good , personally i like it , charectar's they're not much charectar . author should put more charectars , overall it's a good story ,
update fast and put more characters . it's a slice of life . every chapter HAS different STORY . it's a unique idea . if you like vlog or one shots you should read it . it's a uniqe and good story .