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The Darkness approaches
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I greatly apologize if my synopsis is bad.
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This is the story of a boy who came from a broken home with no father just a mentally ill mother. Who he cared for a long time. But never got the love he was looking for.
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Next thing he knows he is dead and getting wishes to reincarnate into a different world. Join Alex Parry on his journey to ascend into a god.
Warning its a system novel
But it's not the type of system that gives him powerups but one that just keeps his progress and a little special something. (NO HAREM)
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5Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Writing quality, the grammatical and typographical errors are noticeable but they can be edited so problem solved. Stability of updates, up until now this story is still on it's third chapter. Story development is five star because the flow of the story is clear though it's not that visualized to the reader's imagination. Character design, you can work on it. World BG, I just want to remind the author that you are writing a novel and not a script for TV series. Okay? Make your readers imagine instead of making them open links. I'll be hoping for your improvement, dear author!
I’m loving this story! Your synopsis is really good! It caught my attention! Great work![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It seems like I forgot to review this my fist time around.... So here it is... my review... Enjoy the stars this brings you and your book...
Checky review for myself and for ppl who want to ask me questions. Also, the novel shall not have a harem, because I think the average person can hardly get by with one woman and normal women don't really want to share their boyfriends with another girl. System novel, dont worry its not a novel where he relies on the system to become stronger. He has it just to see where his progress is
This was a great start, I hope you keep it going. I am very interested in seeing Which direction you take the story. I am a huge fan of this genre. Good luck and all the best.