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The curse mortal
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When someone has lost everything, home, friends and family, even his own humanity, a creature is reborn who must live in the shadows calling it his new home and with his longing for blood.
What can a person who feels no life inside him do? That the only thing that keeps his heart beating is his thirst for blood
There's only one thing you can do to keep someone like that alive.
That is the power of revenge that can make any living being with no hope of ever living again with burning intentions destroy the one who did this to him.
Follow Marcus on this dark journey of blood and pain in which he must do anything to control the power within himself, which will help him achieve his revenge against the one who did this to him!
I feel like is more appealing this way, but you can change if I didn't give justice to your character..
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The first that gets your attention is synopsis kudos for that, secondly the story is osm the plot and characters and pacing everything is balanced and its quite easy to indulge yourself in the story very well written, going straight in my library
The story is really cool, it's an interesting premise with lots of potential and the characters are interesting as well! The English is a bit lacking and sometimes the author should go into more detail and slow down but I'm sure that is going to develop over time. Keep it up! :)
The writing style is perfect and easy to read for those who are already avid readers. The story already seems so complex and I'm extremely curious about the character developments. [img=recommend]
The synopsis is really good and attractive... Smooth narration flow but the author must take care of the grammatical errors as it is a bit off-putting.. description of scenes can be more vivid and detailed. Good work !!
First of all, I suggest add the tag Revenge, since that's the story is about. Or in my opinion, atleast. The story is great so far, and I had a feeling that it will be better.
Your Synopsis had me hooked even before I began reading the actual story. I thing so far it's off to a good start and I can't wait for new updates! Keep it up and good luck!
After reading the synopsis, the first thing which came into my mind were vampires. Second, the novel is quite easy to understand and get along with, but it still needs some improvement which is something common for every novel, especially one with a potential.