The Broken System: King Breeder

LV 4

Lxrd_dura

After reading until chapter 34, I think this novel is great and has a lot of potential, it's like a good book on the back of a library shelf, it's a shame.   1. history:   At the beginning of the story, Mc's life is a bit tragic (seriously he has a worst shit reincarnation, when you wake up you find yourself ... ops no spoil). from the laboratory rat to a sacrificial slave (the beginning is not for the sensitive soul).   But after the tragic arc we see the evolution of the mc (frankly it is the arc that I prefer the most), climb the ladder towards its ultimate objectif (which remains unclear until now),   The MC is not a complete idiot, he thinks well before acting (I don't know why the authors like to make their MC so stupid, I always wondered if they were so stupid) but he makes mistakes in his actions.   And we have the system (cheat sama) it's not like the other shots that we often see (kill an ant and an op lvl or the beginner's box to start better or the quest etc ...).   Here we have a messed up system to acquire a skill it is a little painful (it is broken therefore ...) ha! Yes there is no Harem (at least for the moment), there are not also the stereotypes of the arrogant young master (at least for the moment still), because our mc it plays in the field of war. (I stop here for the story there is too much to read better to understand better)   2. Spelling and grammar:   Sorry English is not my main language, so I can't say much about it (I'll leave it to the professional).   3. update:   The story is regularly updated so it's nickel no problemo   4. Conclusion (finally I started not having *******):   As I said at the beginning, this is a novel with potential (I assure you with all the poop novels that there are on webnovel with a rating of 4.5 or 4.8) it deserves better, I'm not saying it's the best I have read (Author you thought I was going to continue to soc you ****)   Hmm hmm I said that it is a good pepito which wants to be read ... word of Lord_dura.

LV 11

Drain_the_innocent

I am not good at this review ****, but I got to say this is some good ****. ..........................................................llll.llll.lll......................Gheghdghggdhgdhdghdghdg

LV 13

vincentnolan

A man who went through torture, ra**, murder, lose of family, but all that to get bullied by 9 year old girl and axt like a dog. You would think his experience would efdect how he acts. Why tf did you even let us read tgough all of his different lives if he we can't see how that changed him?

LV 3

Blackturtle

Okay...this novel is a good one. Reading from the prologue I got confused but sliding through chapter 1 and still flipping through, I got it now. This is one interesting imagination the author is displaying here. And I love your characters 🤙🤙.

LV 4

Nickaido

Good start , your story looks really promising. The MC suffers a lots but it's what makes the story interesting. Truly good work keep up. I will check your second novel afterward.

LV 3

Coolest_rockest03

Good..........................................................................................novel.........................very good novel....

LV 1

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