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The Black Dragon King of the Void [Stopped]
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Ouma Sora, a young teenager who has lost his family and these emotions find themselves reincarnated with a system to explore the entire multiverse and become its ROI.
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* It will surely not be a big harem, I will surely think to make it 3-4 women tall max and it will not be a perverse character and eager for sexual relations
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NTR.......................,.dont read.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,pussy mc ,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,masochist author ,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,
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There is ntr in this and author justify it the man doesnt **** with irene but he let the man marry irene because of the plot. Hahahha i dont wose dumber the mc or the author i guess it the same considering both of them came from the same person and please donโt rebuke my statement saying that youโre first time writer. Just admit it that you have a fantasy on your gf or wife getting ****ed by some men. And please dont said that it is only on the fairy tail arc, if you do ntr in the fairy tail and i m pretty sure the same **** is gonna happen again because of your stupidity to preserve the โplotโ. I hope your fantasy is fulfilled.
This Fanfic is sooo bad............. D. Dd............................. D. D. D.............. Nothing to do........................... $$$$&&$&)) &) ())))) (). %).) :) :).
The author is a ntr loving trash. This story is trash and only a moron would read this piece of garbage. The author cuckolds the mc to "preserve" the plot.
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Personal opinion it a good story and all these comment of NTR, plz go back and read the dam chapter again, where the **** did it say that irene got ****ed plz tell me, cause I do not see where it say irene was ****ed by someone else, anyways author good luck with the story
NTR trash mc get cucked donโt read....................................... ................................... ..................................
Bueno, acabo de encontrar estรก historia, estaba a punto de dejarla al ver las reseรฑas de que era un NTR, pero me anime ya que a veces la gente mal entiende lo que realmente es, pero sinceramente no es NTR, pero poco falta entiendo tu punto de vista sobre los sacrificios que segรบn tu Irene tuvo que hacer, pero honestamente son estรบpidos, en primer lugar, al tener a Sora no era necesaria la Alianza, entiendo que quieres mantenerte con el canon con lo mรกs que puedas, entiendo que algunos autores no pueden crear nuevas ideas, no es un insulto ni nada parecido, yo mismo soy incapaz de crear cualquier cosa, sรณlo sirvo para leer xb, regresando, a lo que entendรญ, al inicio pusiste al MC en un pedestal de ser muy fuerte, tan fuerte como el Futuro Acnologia, futuro, es una palabra clave, ya que en esta era sรณlo es el inicio de Acnologia, cuando era mรกs dรฉbil, mucho mรกs dรฉbil que en el futuro, desde el inicio se presentรณ al MC como alguien fuerte, y a lo largo como lo suficientemente fuerte como para matar dragones como hormigas, o con suma facilidad, pero despuรฉs lo presentas como si tuviese miedo de pelear con Acnologia, no digo que lo tuviese, pero se da a entender, tambiรฉn en ese tiempo Igneel estaba lo suficientemente ocupado como para importarle el MC, Zeref creo que empezรณ a crear a Natsu, o estaba ocupado con experimentos, tampoco se deberรญa de involucrar con el MC, y sรณlo deja a Acnologia, lo que para mi hubiese estado mejor, es que si estarรญa la alianza, pero no como el matrimonio, mรกs una alianza normal, cosa que ya de por sรญ es innecesaria por la presencia de Sora, que a menos que venga Acnologia con un escuadrรณn o ejรฉrcito de dragones no deberรญa de preocupar al MC, ya que Acnologia nunca se unirรญa a otros dragones, el era conocido por su odio por ellos, y ningรบn dragon en su sano juicio se unirรญa a el, o una amenaza nivel Rey, como Igneel, pero aun asรญ no deberรญa de preocuparse, ya que eso no es posible, no se a que enemigos poderosos te refieres, prรกcticamente el MC ya estรก en la cima, no totalmente pero ya es un Apex, asรญ que todo lo que escribiste en la historia en mi opiniรณn No tiene sentido.
Same plot as a 100 other fanfics. The only difference is he let another man take his wife. The author does the he/she thing. If you dont understand what that means, he calls the mc a he for a couple chapters or paragraphs, and then calls him a she and then a he again. If your gonna do a fanfic at least add your own flare, this is literally just copying the story with bad cliche add-ons. Good luck but im out.
Thanks for your work, hope you don't drop and keep up, more chapters and more update in future, waiting for other chapters, more please, dont drop keep keep keep up, and many thanks, more chapters๐๐
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Very nice novel An essential in any library of feelings at the height of the greatest. A book with a large central die-cut especially if we want to address the understanding of emotions and feelings.
please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters please upload more chapters
Trash ntr๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข
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I'm not a person with a lot of inspiration and creativity so it is possible that chapters may take longer to come out to find something to talk about in the next chapter. Chapter 3 will be released tomorrow, it's a very short chapter while waiting to think about what is going to happen. Do not hesitate to suggest ideas for the Fairy Tail arc, in addition I also hesitate to make Irene the second wife of Sora but I think it would be too fast to have a second wife in the 3rd chapter. Tell me what you think :)
Perhaps the author is a good person but ..... ย Fan fiction doesn't read like a tragedy. Read like a cuckold story. He had strength, but he did nothing. Even if he did not have strength, this would not be a cukoldโs refutation. A man must fight for his love. A man who allows his girlfriend to sleep with another or to marry another, I cease to be men in the eyes of women and become cuckolds. You even screwed up Irene in your story. A woman who loves will not marry someone else's man. Your excuse is only for cuckolds. you are not thinking correctly about a good relationship. I hope in real life you will not suffer from this. I wish the author all the best. If someone against my thinking is ready for dialogue and explanation.