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The Adventures with the originals

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Penulis: EruditionX23

3.72 (26 peringkat)

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"What it's like when someone takes away your deepest, ugliest pain without your consent. It is both a blessed relief and a complete violation"

This quote by Camille O'Connell summarizes the book perfectly.

The story is about a character named Ray Wilson who is reincarnated into the world of the vampire diaries with three wishes.

But everything starts going wrong when new threats and new characters start appearing because of the consequences.

Ray explores the world and faces countless challenges to get what he wants and to prove that he deserves to have all the power that he holds.

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Rank -- Peringkat Power
Stone -- Power stone

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Rawr_Kitten

... why people give this 5 stars I'll never know.... but the story is mashed up with bad English and very little understandable plot line the story that barely makes sense drops a nonrelatable person with bad wishing sense into a world and then randomly decides no plot line just rush everywhere and attack stuff... if you think giving 5 stars for minimal effort is a smart idea we will have a site filled with no good novels please rate accordingly not based on blind kindness that in the long run makes writers think they are the next Steven king when they can't even make a sentence flow in a paragraph as for those raters who are payed and authors who make accounts to rate themselves... there is a special place in novels for you... it ends badly

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Ajoelina

Based on what I’ve read so far.. I love it. Keep doing what you’ve been doing! I want more chapters, but no rush. Go at your own pace, I will be waiting for more.😁👍👍

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9julio9

Great story...................................................................................................... ................................................................................................................................

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ROMAN_EAGLE

Pretty bad in my opinion plz rewrite it ....nbhhdhfhfhfhfhfhfghfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhhdhfhdhfhfhfhfbffnfbfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfhhhhhhhhhhh7758t4886rfgi it 54rthjkhh

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SangN123

Ah this story so short! The happy ending for them all is almost near and everyone from Mikalson family will have a whole family ish... MC action can be well deserving and I enjoy his easy approach! This family bonding is soon to be seen!

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Freddy_Walker

I'm going to be honest i couldn't get past the 3rd chapter...everything is illogical, he specify his weakness but then start screaming when Lucien put a piece of wood in his chest which made no sense considering he already eliminated wood as his weakness, he wishes to be more powerful than an upgraded original plus a hybrid but gets scared of the originals when he could beat one with his vampire physical powers alone even if he have no fighting experience...its all makes no sense no matter how you look at it considering he's the one to ask for these things, then his random backstory literally falls apart the moment he didn't feel pain from the wood in his heart when even an upgraded original, enhanced original and originals desiccate and feel pain from that...I loved the type of hybrid he was but the story line itself was just bad

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pan39
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Great novel ░▄▀▄▀▀▀▀▄▀▄░░░░░░░░░ ░█░░░░░░░░▀▄░░░░░░▄░ █░░▀░░▀░░░░░▀▄▄░░█░█ █░▄░█▀░▄░░░░░░░▀▀░░█ █░░▀▀▀▀░░░░░░░░░░░░█ █░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█ █░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░░█ ░█░░▄▄░░▄▄▄▄░░▄▄░░█░ ░█░▄▀█░▄▀░░█░▄▀█░▄▀░ ░░▀░░░▀░░░░░▀░░░▀░░░

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DarkWizardZeref

When I first seen this novel I thought it would be good. How wrong I was. Noone should ever read this ****. It has a **** concept and Noone should be caught reading it. Real bad storytelling.

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NwrdChrack

Nice novel. Keep going on.....................

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Saberswordguy

This is a very interesting idea keep on doing your things bro.😁

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JackHudson

Based on what I have read so far I think that the story is quite good and I'm also expecting that his enemies should be little stronger too.

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VALIDREADER

Nice fan fiction honestly. Even his own story is like Klaus. Father abandoned him then his mother died and literally everyone trying to kill him but MC is really strong

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AbsoluteCarnage

Experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience

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Kal_Cross

Great book and grammar 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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_James_Jones_

Pretty bad Dfxjfufufjfjdjdjrjdhdhdufufjfjjfdnhdhdhxhdjdjdjxjxjsdjdjxjxxjdidjdjdjddjdjdcjcjcjjcjcjfkfkffkjdbdjdjdnxkcmckccgshdhdudjrjrjrkrkrkfkdkdmfmfmfmdmdkdkdkkdfjjfjdjdkfkfkfkgkhktigohkgiviivbkbkkvkvkvkbkbkbkbkbkg

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Aldy_Satya

Keep write man, i like your fanfic🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌

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JoKeRtHeBrOkEr

Hey author are you rewriting the story??? Because there was way more than just 5 chapters. Don’t pay attention too this sentence the dam app has me doing this for 140 words.

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