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Tenchi Nura childhood as ryouta kise (continues at Tenchi Nura guardian of the multiverse)
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I was always the second fiddle in my past life or the B-Team.
My best friend was the best. I didn't hate him I supported him but it made me feel jealous of his natural talent and always labeled number 2. However, I found a new trick to surpass him but ended up dying after performing it.
I was reincarnated as Tenchi Nura but I'll go by my family ... I am happy to be reincarnated but they have no Air trecks and I don't seem to have normal superpowers. I just have good looks.well this time I will become the greatest athlete... meaning in any competitive event I will be the best! fighting best! slaying monsters best! sleeping with girls best...wait why are you pulling down my pants...
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1st thing first, do not look at the name of this story because with how everything is going, it will never happen.. This story is good if you like crossover without minding flaw but if you are picky, you will be fast to bite your nail trying to understand the world cause the world building is basically inexistant, we are just thrown into a world where everything exist but evryone is so good at hiding it that no one noticed any problem. As for character building, other than the main character and really close partner growing up once in a while, other are just bland with fixed personality. The writing is okay, readable english but it’s hard to follow who is talking at time. And finally, the story devellopment, even though it’s fast-paced , it still fall in place.
Well, until it's interesting, but in morals there are several parts that I do not even know who's talking to who, and it's hard for me to understand. That ruins my interest. I would love for you to improve this, because I would love to read without bothering who is who.
Less in the introduction of world backgrounds and causation. Less in terms of character recognition to clarify these character traits. Less writing atmosphere in the story. I hope this can help.
This novel looks like you put anything you think without any background and foundation. Just inputing whenever you think of anything. Well it is average at most i guess
quick question why dose he get none of the money and does all the bleeding work quick question why dose he get none of the money and does all the bleeding work
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..... The story does not correspond to the title.... I seriously want to give this story 1* solely because of the misleading title, but oh well, I'm still 'kind'.
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... fast pace is an understatement. so many crossovers with so much information skipped and a few 'puzzle pieces' tossed in, this story is confusing and when read it gives the reader a hollow feeling sort of like "hmmm... i just read that..didn't i?"
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will he be go to wwe? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I don't even know what's happening anymore😴😴 too many unknown characters that I don't even know who they are😴😴😴. I thought it would be sports but too. Many people having a super powers kinda sucks *.*.*.*.**.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.**.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*.*
This story is a cross over where multiple anime worlds are connected. The MC goal is to be number 1 in all of the sports. From E-sports to UFC. However, a misunderstanding happens and he ends up at an all-girls school. The school is seeking a male because the girls have very limited knowledge of boys outside their family. This is the story of a boy trying to become the best athlete while attending an all-girls school The beginning is just to build up the world and introduce characters early on.