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TAMING DARKNESS

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Devon, the prince of darkness and leader of legions, detests humans and their pure souls. But then, he meets his match in a common human, Olivia, and he experiences the strange feelings called love. And now, he is torn between remaining in the darkness where he is most powerful, or stepping into this new and exciting light which the stubborn and fearless little human brings into his dark world.

But fate plays a cruel game on them when the dark and horrid secretes of their past is revealed.
Can these two ill-fated lovers overcome the hurdles of grudges? Will love and forgiveness bring them the light that brightens up the darkness of hell?

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    ASAH1
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    Great story telling, slowly bring the reader to get into each character background and their motivation. the best thing of this novel was conversations and interactions between each character was always described in extra detail, can easily imaged this as a nice manga or tv series.

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    WeebWrites96

    Wow, the first chapter brought tears to my eyes, and the following chapters are keeping me invested. Please continue updating the series l can't wait for the next chapter.

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    SevenZeros

    Wow... The story is better than my expectations. I could see you put so much effort and time into doing all this writing. The story is interesting but there are times that the story made me bored because my mind didn't ask that many questions about the story. Sometimes the paragraphs are too long and I don't have a problem with that since I'm a nerd but it has been proven that the human mind chooses to read shorter paragraphs because it looks clearer and easier to read than bigger ones. The descriptions are good, even better than most novels but put it in mind that It's harder to imagine, the more information there is, so try to put in the necessary amount of needed information and don't overload because that would put a burden on the readers mind making them annoyed and then stop reading the novel. You don't need to change it because it's already perfectly fine. Good luck my fellow writer and if you have time, can you also check mine? It's called 'Zero Degrees Celsius' and thank you for reading this paragraph of a newbie writer that could only see the mistakes of others not his own. Also, when you read mine please also write a review, so i can be guided better in my path.

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    Zetsuya
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    Okay I have reached the other chapter so today I will rate with my observation and the quality development. And thus this is my overall. Thanks to the author for his/her wonderful work!

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    Zetsuya
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    Amazing! Good book you have there I only read 1-8 chapter but it's good. Taming Darkness have a great story plot to me and entertainment to read.

    1yr
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    Grandmasters

    This is amazing! What a lovely story of love and passion. I liked the MC as he was complex enough and also the pacing. There were little to no grammatical error and typos. I also liked the narration and its voice! Kudos for a job well done! [img=recommend]

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    Maximus_Renegade

    Unapologetically bad writing. If you have time to spend doing something, watch paint dry. Even if it's during a dark and stormy night that's dark and also stormy during the night.

    1yr
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    Teddy_write

    Great book really enjoyed it. it's so good and worth reading

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