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Synthetic Survivor: Machine Age
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“There is this aching feeling, it pains my heart and fries my already half-human and half-machine heart. I awoke in a world of death and destruction, I am the only survivor. But this may be a blessing, this new world, this world that boasts magic, maybe I will finally bring salvation to my world, even if it causes millions of lives,”
One woke with amnesia underneath the shattered remains of a once prosperous human civilization. He remembered nothing, his past or the events that happened that caused the world to become as it was. He was no longer purely human, he woke to find himself a hybrid between a man and a machine. But amid the radioactive dunes and lifeless expanse of the Earth, a lone machine network survived the disaster. After discovering that he controlled them, he set out on one goal: Rebuild. But how can he fully rebuild? For the Earth once had life but now was barren, not even bacteria survived.
Until the wormhole appeared a decade later.
But he was not alone, when he awoke, a voice rang in his head, who was it? It was his friend, a friend from the past. Although he does not remember her name, he still felt how important she was before even if he has lost all his humanity and memories, her name was Hailey. Follow her as she guides One a decade after he awakes, the both of them will form the most powerful machine leaders who will ever walk in the face of the two worlds.
Their story will start a decade into One’s rebuilding, he now controlled a vast network of machines around the planet Earth, all focused in the effort of rebuilding the world towards its former glory, there was only one thing missing, an essential attribute which differentiated Earth from all other known planets, life.
But everything changed when a wormhole opened, a breach within the fabric of space and time, opening a pathway between Earth and a world of fantasy! Follow One as he and his Empire explores this new mystical world full of elves, goblins, orcs, dwarves, ogres, humans, kingdoms, empires and magic! His goal of restoring life may be within his grasps.
But that does not mean there won’t be opposition. There will be battles, wars and calamities, millions will perish in the onslaught that will soon follow.
Especially, when One discovers that the new world held the secrets of the past. He will face Deities and powerful foes, will he prevail? New weapons he will smith and countries he shall wipe out, for he is, One.
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the plot is unique it's a plus point for this but I wonder why in chapter 2 it use 'I' but later use 3'rd person POV? Also simple suggestion since I read this in app, the paragraph made is too long. It's quite uncomfortable reading it so please cut down the paragraph into short one. Grammar is ok it can be edited but please try not to only add 'He asked', 'he said', 'he answered' u can use variety to conversation as not to make it boring. Keep it up u got potential!
I really like this story as it has many possibilities and the coldness of the MC gives it a certain thrill. But it has to go in a certain direction to especially in the romance section as I see it not really fit for him to have a girl (maybe if he has an interdimensional empire)
Really liked the first 7 chapters and I thought the main character was admirable. But that might have been because we didn't actually read much about the main character. The first things he does in the new world is kill, kill, kill. Nothing but death and destruction while expanding his base. This is where my mind started screaming no no no! Because I quite liked the story so far and wanted more. Then he decides that he wants to remain secret despite letting people escape his assaults and thinks to make use of goblins. Which like usual are the enemy of mankind. So while he's expanding his territory he sets the goblins on at least one village. I almost stopped reading when he thought of his plan but decided to keep on for a bit hoping it wasn't true. Then he actually called on the goblins. That's where I stopped reading.
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Pretty boring, switches all over the place. No foreshadowing of introductions, too many plot lines occurring at the same time. Nothing much to add besides this.
So.. AI boy wakes upp and deconaminates earth, big problem though, Every single speck of life on earth is gone. Suddenly a portal to a high fantasy opens upp and AI boy decides to kill everyone that comes through the portal even thoug they can't even scrape the paint of his murder-machines. Writing is not bad although there are plenty of misstakes. Story could be awesome, but this is more my preference not being met rather than it being bad. It is impossible to sympathise with MC due to him, it? not having any emotions. World building is ok.
I have really enjoyed this book. Story is about a guy who is a human robot hybrid that can control machines. One journey through a wormhole later he discovers a world of magic and dragons goblins etc... MC is a "bit" more overpowered than is strictly necessary (that is one sentence I never thought I would type seriously) overall it has the excitement you would hope for while reading the book description. Pros: overpowered mc Great writing quality Great action scenes Characters are believable Cons: Author makes MC too powerful early in the story I expect to see some classic plot devices later on into the story to make up for this problem. The actual technology building mechanics and in depth planning are somewhat lacking. Overall I found it to be an amazing story definitely worth checking out!
I read the first 4 chapters and It was a great read. The world background is great till now. The pacing is excellent and I like that it is written in the first perspective POV. But as the main character is not properly described, so I cannot get an image of him in my mind. Would help if you write a little to describe him. But other than this, I liked everything and would recommend people to read it.
Highly recommended novel & guys please leave comment on every chapter to show your support for this novel👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
I REALLY enjoy the premise of this novel. An Ai human hybrid with basically no emotions attempts to complete his last programmed mission which is to save earth and return human civilization. After a 100 years of rebuilding a wormhole opens to a new and magical word filled with life. What I like is how the MC pursues his goals, the whole conflicting nature of returning humanity to its former glory by murdering most in the new world and brainwashing the survivors into believing in his utopian goal. Give the book a try if you like the idea of skynet going against magical gods, monsters and all kinds of their fanatic worshipers.
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The story itself is a wonderful concept, a splicing of a super scientific world with a fantasy world. The problem is execution. The story reads as if it’s being written by someone with English as their second language or straight from voice diction. The characters have weak impressions and the story rambles around with events and character actions that don’t really make much sense. There are some redeeming qualities however as the author often avoids common tropes (through design or mistake I can’t tell) and takes time to go back and review his work. Best of all he keeps to his release schedule.
I don’t know what to say other than I love it!! It’s a great novel that I think most people will come to enjoy, tru it out I highly recommend it
Overall it was pretty much just like a summary of what happened and for me that really likes world building and kingdom building/with machines similar to the novel mechanical god emperor it would have been nice if he went more into detail in the beginning if it went to a different direction with more like a dedicated volume one rebuilding earth and volume 2 wormhole to another world appears would be so much better imo but nah he wakes up and rebuilds earth in 2 chapters so no build up or momentum in the story so its very bland but i like the concept as i view it as a rts game like stellaris not sure what future chap has in store but already disappointed in lack of details and fleshing out the story.
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So far, this is a very interesting read. I like that the MC has random spurts of emotions and then goes back to being emotionless. Overall good read.
Best story on here read it One Is All Powerful!!!! Nor ur average fantasy novel either on an whole differential level i mean the blood and gore and violence here is not 4 little kids kids i meant Newbs and **** otakus stay away you'll obviously read anyway though but be warned it will make you cry and vomit like ur in the book itself and people u can feel were one is coming from too hes been thru alot but seriously he need an woman to complete the mature vibe at least i want ONE(ONE Is The MC Name) to go berserk and kill all on the battlefield like an machine human hybrid god!!
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Well written, clear plot and great character development. The pace is just right with side stories that could make you feel what the author wants you to feel. This novel deserves more that it has received, it is clearly a gem. Good work.
This novel is a must read for everyone the novel well written with nicely compose. Story background and characters are superb, ..📗📘📙📒📑📔 📣📣📣📣📣 👍👍👍👍👍
overall it's good-to-be-read story with a cup of tea in relaxing times. keep up the good work, should ya. that's it, I don't know anymore just filling some requirements review......
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The summery got me interested in your story, it smells like potential. ..............................................................................................................................................
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